Every civilization has creation myths, in Equestria the most well know is the Precursors; the strange entities who not only named every species, but gave the sentient ones the gift of language and writing. This story has existed far longer then recorded history. The Precursors have been a bed time story for young foals for countless generations, but are they really just a story?
One day, in the sometimes quiet town of ponyvile, a familiar group of ponies open a gateway to the last remaining Precursor fortress, what they find inside will change everything.
Now the world needs to prepare for the return of the faction that wiped out the Precursors in the past; the Dark Precursors. All that stands between them and their ominous goal is one 15 year old 'human' male...no pressure
(Looking for custom cover image and pre reader))
A kamen rider fourze crossover...
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ITS PONY TIME
This so awesome. i was planning to do a kamen rider fourze fic as well but i kept getting the problem of how do i get zodiarts into the story, so here is me hoping that you got that settled and ready for ignition because you have fed me and i want moar, Moar i say. Well any way, i hope that is who i think it is unless you got something else in plan.
Eh...
You have me sold on the concept (Hell, Fourze is enough of a sell as it is), but your writing style makes this very difficult to read. There's a lot of grammatical errors, and the sentences seem a bit disjointed.
I want to see where this is going, really I do. But you need to get a pre-reader, and a good one. I'll track this, but before you post another chapter, try to clean up the first one a bit.
I signed up to this site because a friend sent me this story, and so I could comment with Kouma KITAAAAAAA!
I can not vouch for the accuracy of the Japanese word for Pony in the preceding sentence.
510012Trust me, I know i need a pre-reader, but since this is my first story here and I'm still new to the site, I don't know where to find one. If you could recomend someone I'd be grateful
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Unfortunately, I don't know anyone in particular. Shouldn't be too hard to find one, though, all you gotta do is ask around on here, maybe Equestria Daily, or maybe even Ponychan.
Dat cover image a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/w/twilightdatassplz.jpg
OH.MY.GOD
A continuation is needed ASAP. Also, it would be fun if the human were to speak Japanese, because really, that would have me completely sold
510312sorry to disapoint, but I was never planning of language being an issue. it would interfere with what I already have written (and a simple translation spell seems like a cop out to me). Also, I'd like to get a pre-reader before I post the next chapter if I can
510058 Wow! You sighed up just to comment on this! I'm honored
This is cool, I'm definatly tracking this. Though if have if I might say somthing, I don't think Gentarou would run if he saw two candy coloured equines and a small dragon. Genatrou see's strange monstors all the time, I doubt two ponies and a small dragon would scare him. Then again i have no idea if thats Gentarou inside that armour. I can see why Twilight, Pinkie and Spike would be scared, I mean Fourze's design confused me when I saw the first scans of the suit.
512072 As awsome as Gentarou is (for there is no denying it), if I used him then I'd have to completly change his character to make what I have planned out work, which would suck. I might do a 'what if it was Gentarou' omaku though. Also if I wasn't clear in the chapter; the human has on a white t shirt, jeans, and black shoes. I was trying to decribe it from a pony pov. No Fourze armor yet.
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Oh okay, I'm actually writing a Kamen Rider and MLP crossover. I'm still in the process of writing it though, also I want to give you a warning. There are going to be people out there blasting your translation of the word kita. Now I'm one of those people which are aware that kita can be translated in to any word related to excitement or placement. I have seen the phrase Uchuu Kita being translated as Space is Awesome, Space is Cool and It's Space Time. Which all of those terms are correct, your translation of it as well. I'm posting this comment hoping those types of idiots will read this and decide not to waste their time by posting a 'correction' comment. By the way I follow TV-Nihon for my toku stuff, who do you follow?.
512347 I just google what I want to watch and pick the first thing I see. It's worked pretty well for me so far
And to think; I almost called this chapter "Chase Through The Forest"
Dude its been ages since you updated your FourzeXMlp fic
I demand more material for depriving me from your stories D>
686295I mentioned in a blog post that the delay was because I was looking for a prereader, now that that problem's fixed, the updates will come much quicker
really
good so far
687021Why thank you. Don't worry about the lack of action, I plan to remedy that soon
is this human a sentai warrior. since your using mask ero thing
This has been here for 3 days? Why was I not informed? more, how was I not informed. I'm even watching you. Shouldn't that tell me when you update?
Anyway, Liking it so far. So, from what I can tell that person isn't Gen-chan. But is he Fourze? Like from another time or something? Who's Alex? I obviously don't know much of what's going on, but I await further chapters to see how it goes.
Man, I didn't know Twilight has a brother, obviously I don't watch enough MLP:FIM.
703378Yes, this is not Gentaro. As I mentioned in a comment already; if i put Gentaro in this, I would have to completely change his character for what i have planed to work.
I'll be answering one of your questions next chapter (which will come out quicker then the last chapter).
You don't know about Shining Armor? Didn't you see the season two 2 part finale?
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Nope. I've watched maybe 7 episodes, and I know next to nothing about the episodes I haven't seen.
Just to let everyone know, if you spot any grammar and/or spelling errors come to me about it. Cause if I fucked up I would like to know where I fucked up.
*Goes to MLP FIM Wiki, looks up Cadance. Princess Cadence* Fuck, I missplet her name by one letter. Goddamit I need to have a list of pony names so I don't fuck them in the process.
791959Fixed
awesome!
'Ahhhhhh why he no say space is here'
or say henshin and especially ' kamen rider fouze lets do this mono eh mono'
well besides those little nit piks i really fine with this chapter. but you better do at lease one catchphrase of the real fourze plz
792280Don't worry, he will get a catchphrase. Since he speaks English "Henshin" would seem grossly out of place. And since Carter isn't as excitable as Gen, his "space is here" catchphrase wouldn't fit either, it would be honorably ooc for him. But don't worry, he will get a variation of one of Gen's catchphrases that I not only think sounds awesome, but is bizarrely fitting in the world of fim. Don't expect it any time soon though, there's some character development i need to get out of the way first
If it seems that Shining Armor came to the conclusion that human = precursors too fast, think of it like this:
Humans are an advance civilization from the past
Precursors are an advance civilization from the past
It makes more sense when you think of it like that
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LESS EXPLANATION
MORE CHAPTERS
792317 well i can understand that, the only catchphase that i know you can do is the horoscope 'wish upon the stars' since Scorpio and Libra used it. for the new Fourze, i cant say anything since i cant tell his personality just from these few chapters, so good luck with trying to create a catchphrase, cause everyone knows with kamen riders you have to have a catchphrase. read you when you update.
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I just realised something, precursors, dark precursors. What is this Jak & Daxter.......................................no this is a MLP/Fourze crossover. Still think Fourze is a rather mediocre show. Can't wait for Wizard, hopefully it will be better than Fourze. And rings are better than switches, never liked switches as a gimmick to begin with.
867380It's about time someone thought of that. Yes, this fic did start out as a sort of Jak & Daxter crossover (only eco and light and dark forms). Another thing; when I first planed this out, Fourze was going to be a little kid the age of the CMC with no Zodiarts. It was going to be a 3 parter; 1st part childhood, 2nd adolescence, 3ed adulthood. He was also going to fall in love With Sweetie Bell. I've gone through a lot of different ideas for my first mlp fic (Mostly Kamen Rider crossovers). But I think I picked the right one.
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Oh my darling Sweetie Belle, one day you'll be mine. Me and my crushes.
I WAS LAUGHING THE ENTIRE TIME!!!!
lol
that was crazy awesome! 
eh... 8 out of 10. but it's still a good story.
Seems fourze is longing a friend,or somthing more,or is remembering the past.
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Fourze is currently
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ok, I this some kind of AU fourze or is Carter confused?
If this is from cannon then he should be Kengo, since it was his father the one who developed the switches and the fourze driver (with the exception of the last switches I think...), or is he Kengo's son, then Fourze should have all the switches available, although he may not be able to use them all (such as the change states, and cosmic).
and About the zodiarts are they still humans on this story (because, well you know the body is freed whe the zodiart is destroyed)? or will the horoscopes start corrupting ponies?
1078993 It's an AU Fourze. And the zodiarts are still human in this one (which begs the question; what happened to Orion?)
Y U NO UPDATE?!
*slaps*
Mmph, mmphmm mph mmmph *Ok, I deserved that*
1358812I already said in the latest chapter that I have a lot of school work now. But I am working on an omaku to tide you all over
1358848 What's an omaku?
1358874Sorry, I misspelled it. It's supposed to be 'omake'. and you'll find everything you need to know here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Omake
1358948 I've always wondered what those were called.
I eagerly await your next update!
The story is grate. I love it. My only complaint is that it isn't Gentarou behind the mask. I mean just imagine the types of awesomeness him and Pinky Pie wield creat