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Pastel Pony


Just a girl doing her best to write semi-entertaining whatnots. I'm a female brony, not a pegasister ...Get it right.

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As far as antagonistic, anti-social teenagers went, I always figured I was relatively normal.
Aside from the fact that I talk to myself in my own head way too much.
And my thoughts are always like wildfires that can never be stopped, never be controlled.

I did say relatively.


Until I woke up this morning with a pink and purple stripe in my hair and Twilight Sparkle's voice in my head.
I knew my mom should have listened when I said there was something wrong with me... Now I'm actually, certifiably, insane.
Probably.

Featured 11/11/14 - 11/14/14

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 125 )

This is intriguing. I'll read the new chapters as they're uploaded. :twilightsmile:

This is a pretty interesting concept.

I have to agree, this is a different take on things, and I am curious where it will go.

THIS-----^ This story here. This has the potential to start an entire universe of stories. So I have but one more thing to say.

Yes.

Whoaaa this has five score potential keep updating his because this seems like it can get big so far I'm REALLY interested :pinkiehappy:

this is a great story i eagerly await your next chapter. i am curiuos though did you get your inspiration fron a really good fanfic called "five score,over four" if so this story is going to be good even if not this story is still going to be awesome

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Nope, while I've heard of that story, I've personally never read it... So, any similarities between the two are really just coincidences.

5257660 ok still this story is going to be awesome i eagerly await your next chapter

UMG IZ ZO GREHT UPDAHT PLOX

Two words for you: fucking. brilliant.

Clever premise. Tracking this now, please do not disappoint. :raritywink:

So, Grace with Twilight Sparkle in her head likely has to go out and find the remainder of the Mane 6 who will be inside the head of someone else who may or may not possess similar personality traits on top of some kind of physical marker indicating which pony is in them. After that, they have to find someone else who base on what I read could be capable of acting independently with full access to whatever power they have, and they may or may not be evil.

If that's the gist of what this chapter has revealed so far, then it should be interesting to see how this all plays out.

Good job so far. I am interested to see where this is going.

I usually tend to stay away from these types of storues, but geez, this is incredible. Please don't keep is waiting for more chapters.

Aw, man! I had an idea like this a long time ago, but never thought it good enough to write. Then I see this...!
Aw, well. If anyone has done it, I may as well read it. Probably better than anything I could write.
EDIT: Oh, wait, my mistake. I thought this human would be in Twilight's head, too.

5257660 This story is almost an exact mirror of Voice in my Head and i love it

5257660 five score is basically a ~300k monster of a tf story that was so good fimfiction had to ban any more side fics because there was too many so i hope this turns out to be a bigger story then your one-shots because i can see great potential in this story c:

The cliffhanger has us heading for one of the scenes that passes for common in the not-so-common field of ponies on earth. Prose is good enough that I'm sticking around to see your take on it - I don't see anything particular in the setup here to hint at anything massively out of the box for this fic's approach to showing the ponies their own TV show, but there's always room for surprises.

I'm having fun so far regardless, so whatever. :twistnerd:

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Unfortunately, I doubt I'm about to do anything clever with the scene involving Twilight and her being in a television show, (I don't honestly know what the norm is, I don't read to many ponies on earth fics) It's really just more of a required part in a story like this, and something I need to get out of the way to move forward with the story. Not that I won't try to have some fun with the scene, but I doubt it's going to be spectacularly brilliant.

I want to see more of this awesomness!!!

Well, that was pretty fun to read so far. I will definitely read on! Have a hoof up.

this story is so much fun I've never laughed so much before :rainbowlaugh: just because of reading a story. I realy :heart: that story. would you be a dear and keep writing that Story. :pinkiehappy:

Interesting. So the rest of the Mane Six are in other girls' heads? I can't wait to see how this turns out.

you hypocrite! before you remove the pony from your brothers eye, first remove the branch from your eye. then you can see clearly to remove the pony from there eye.:pinkiehappy:

Not to be a jerk for only making this comment, but:

Aside from the fact that I talk to myself in my own head way to much.

Should be too*

Well made, well done, and a well explained take on the whole voice in my head thing, good work.

~The D.j.

Humans are not made out of glass, we won't pass out from collapsing to the floor.

5262462 Maybe a combo of the vapours and cranial injury?

5262550 People won't pass out if they're hit by a car, they won't pass out if they're in a plane accident. The human skull is really bloody durable.

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Eh, tile floor, plus shock...

It could happen.

I've seen one of my idiot friends give herself a concussion just from running into a metal pole, so anything's possible.

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Ack, thanks. It's always the little things I miss. :rainbowderp:

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Ugh. Please, please get rid of that.

It is completely stupid to have, if I'm honest.

If it was an EqD or Twilight's Library posting, then I could understand. Anyway.

This looks interesting, frankly, and I think I shall take a read.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Annnnnnd alright.

You most certainly have my interest.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Fascinating...

You've the makings of a pretty good story here. A bit quick, but otherwise solid.

~Skeeter The Lurker

This is the funniest story i've read so far! :rainbowlaugh: I LOVE IT!

It’s a physical marker of my presence in your mind, possibly not even the only one. The longer I’m here, the more aspects of myself will entwine with you.

High-Octane Nightmare Fuel. :pinkiecrazy:

Pretty interesting so far.

That entire fitst paragraph of the description is me in a nutshell. Have you been spying? :pinkiegasp:

Interesting. :twilightsmile:

This story has some good potential. Keep going.

Liked and followed for future updates. :raritywink:

Huh. How interesting! Cool fic so far!

Why is there a picture of Rarity on your wall?

I blink. Oh… Right. That. Shit.

Lolz!!

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I've fainted due to fever before. You really can fall down and not notice until after you're on the ground. In that state either you pass out or you don't, the hitting the ground part has no bearing on weather you faint or not. It's not enough distance and usually not the right angle to cause an injury capable of knocking you unconscious.

This reminds me a little of Five Score Divided by Four but has an original twist to it. I liked that one and so far I am enjoying this one. Keep it up.

Different, new, interesting....I HATE IT!
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IM KIDDING BLOODY BRILLIANT! HASKILL! FETCH ME MY FINEST CHEESE!
Oh...that hair....I may hafta...cut it off and mount it on my wall! Hoho!

I really like how this is going, can't wait for future parts to come out.:twilightsmile:

Heh, small world.
I had this literal idea in my head for the past month or so but was busy with other stories.
Well, I'll just toss that into the bin of things I'll never write. Go on and write a masterpiece for us! :ajsmug:

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Five score was okay. I felt it hamstrung itself with the authour's choice to have the ponies completely subsume their (admittedly artificial) human counterparts. There was the opportunity to have a very interesting man-versus-self conflict alongside the more mundane man-versus-man conflict, but it was sadly never explored once both parties joined up together.

I hope that in this story, the two remain separate, even as more physical changes occur. Having Twilight teach Grace to be more engaged and friendly (that's an assumption that she's not, as we haven't had any interpersonal examples in the text) is perfectly fine, as would Grace getting Twilight to loosen up a bit, but the two should remain separate.

Hm... it has... potential. Not sure if Andie is too acerbic or not, could go either way at this point. Be careful with Twilight; she tends to be a character of premature exposition what with how she likes to lecture and explain things.

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>> once both parties joined up together

You might be thinking the Ponyearthverse. In 5 Score they didn't have headvoices or merge with anything that I recall. Except Sweetie Belle who managed to wallhack Discord's enchantment. That was a plot point in the end, when they didn't even know if they could fight in Equestria without having known it.

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