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DigiDuncan


An aspiring digital media producer and avid nerd.

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Pinkie Pie's ability to break the fundamental laws of physics gets the universe to turn against her. WIth the help of the ever-analytical Twilight Sparkle, and the rest of her friends, maybe she can use this power for good before it rips her, and the rest of the universe, to shreds. A serious-ish comedy adventure.

I should probably mention that yes, this is a universe in which Twilight is an alicorn yet repaired the library and chooses to live there. Also, yeah my chapters are short, deal with it.


This project has been discontinued since, duh, it's been years and I'm not picking back up a fanfiction of a series I stopped watching after Season 6. Enjoy what's here if you still do!

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 42 )

A tiny bit of errors here and there, but otherwise, great start for first fanfic. You, sir, have earned a like, favorite, and track!:twilightsmile:

Applied cryogenics, for fun and profit and Pinkie emergency!

Not a half bad story! Some lack of detailing and minimum mistakes, but otherwise a gem of a story and quite an original concept. Allow me to be one of your first followers.
And oh, yeah! Almost forgot.
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You were really waffling in this chapter.

Pinkie just keeps getting weirder... I don't think she's dying though...

5272520 You want her to die?

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There are worse things that could happen.

5264850 I see what you did there!

5393470 I don't! What's the joke?

Haha Yeehaw!

And... then everyone fell forty feet to the ground right?

This story must be hard to think up weird ways to happen to Pinkie.

I forgot how funny this story was.

6238838 Thanks so much! I wrote this chapter late last night, so I'm glad it turned out well!

“Who’s that rapping at my chamber door?” inquired Twilight Sparkle, giggling at herself over the literary pun.

Not a pun. It's a reference. :)

Not necessarily a mistake given that authors are free to take liberties with Equestria's technology level, but it's rare to see ponies make reference to television. At best, they have film and projectors.

Rainbow ended up using a sonic rainboom to weaken the metal enough to blast through it with Twilight’s energy beams.

How... does that even

6252599 Maybe it's a projection TV!

Note to self: cover plotholes better.

6252575 Good catch. I'll change that, it makes more sense.

and she started saying she was going to call my manager, but I'm my manager!

Actually I'm pretty sure Mr and Mrs Cake are Pinkie's managers, or at least her employers. *nitpick nitpick nitpick nitpick!*

Actually, I was going to recommend you stay at my house for a night or two.

Yes! Sleepover story! *steals*

Luckily, Pinkie Pie supplied a great dose of laughter as usual, by being her own Mystery Science Theater 3000 throughout the entirety of their television session.

Someone sitting down and just riffing and nitpicking on someone else's work? I have no idea what that's like. :twilightblush:

her mana scanner

This is a gloriously-named device. ^^

All my trivial nitpicking aside, this is an enjoyably silly story. The over-fast pacing, while generally a hallmark of beginner authors, actually works for the story's madcap style. :)

Your Pinkie reminds me a bit of FanOfMostEverything's conception of Pinkie Pie as a chaos elemental.

No, I don't have a TVTropes page, how do you even get those?

You can create one yourself, or, if someone is a big enough fan of your story, they might create one for you. Anyone can start a new page on TV Tropes.

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Your Pinkie reminds me a bit of FanOfMostEverything's conception of Pinkie Pie as a chaos elemental.

Link to the story? I can't seem to find it. :derpytongue2:

:pinkiesmile: "Twilight, what are you doing?"
:twilightoops: "I'm ripping the sensors off of you before you notice!"
:unsuresweetie: "Oh, okay..."

Comment posted by DigiDuncan deleted Dec 15th, 2015

Long chapter coming next, Pinkie Promise! :pinkiesmile:

Hehe, this is a great story.

6255803 - I missed this somehow. ^^ It's more a headcanon FOME has that is often represented in his stories when Pinkie shows up.

6732683 Thank you so much! It really means a lot to me to hear such kind words when referring to a piece of work I've created. It was really hard to push forward to continue writing this due to my sudden writer's block I experienced, but I've thought of new directions this can go and am really excited to get them on paper. (er... pixels.)

great to see an update i love Pinkie Pie.

A pink bubble formed around the two, and then pooped,

:twistnerd:

"Oh sweet Luna this has been a long few days; not only that but I feel like we've made roughly zero progress!"

You don't make progress in quantum mechanics. You have a certain probability of success, and a certain probability of failure. You continue to fail just as badly, as the probability rises and rises, until it's high enough that you just by chance happen to succeed. Then you continue to succeed. One state, then suddenly the other. Quantized.

Care to tell me more about the Quantum series?

7381412 Absolutely!

There's not much I can reveal right now, but the Quantum universe is my own spin-off universe in which crazy things are going to happen. My plan is for all the stories to be sequential, so whatever happens in this story will remain in the next one, eventually leading to an alternate universe/mythos all my own, that is decidedly not canon.

The next story will be called Quantum Sparkle, if that gives you any hints as to where this is going. :twilightblush:

Hmm, interesting. But you should have had all the Twilights yelling at Pinkie. :derpytongue2:

7587217 Thanks for the idea! I added a quick line. It's definitely what I saw in my head.

"Pinkie, Spike, let's go upstairs and let this... sort itself out," said Twilight Prime. Legends would be told of what a terrible idea this wasl when centuries later the world pulled itself out of the ashes.

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