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87AscendantJustice
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Sounds great.
looking really good I will defiantly be watching this story to se how it develops.
Not a bad opening, so you changed it to keep them as ponies huh? If that's the case, then there's really no need for the human tag.
Omg Foxy from five nights at freddys, or hmmm whats the pony term of it, also didnt the victom lose the front part of the brain the lobo-whats it called
5361355 Yeah, but Bright's case is special. In this story, Foxy's jaw wasn't meant to be very strong, so his teeth dealt most of the damage. They permanently dented his skull, but they didn't actually penetrate it. But this isn't my idea. I got it from someone else's story, who depicted Mike Schmidt as the victim of the Bite pf '87. I don't remember the author's name or his story's, but give the credit to him.
Also, in canon, Foxy bit off the victim's frontal lobe. He pretty much turned them into a breathing vegetable, as that's where much of our higher-level thinking takes place.
Oh your saying that its a twist off of the bite of 87 and that the child survived but was given blunt trauma due to the bite and now has some "conditions" such as fear of large groups of people, in the game foxy would try to catch you while a whole mess of children would sometimes make a lot of noise thus confusing him/her, the bite just made it worse.
Alao what is a human vegetable anyway?
5364776 A human vegetable is pretty much a person who doesn't react at all to their surrounding environment. They'll still feel hunger and any basic instincts, but that's it. Think of a human vegetable as an actual vegetable, only it's in human form.
Oh...well that sucks. :(
Im keeping a helmet on from now on.
5365160 Ha, don't worry. That only happens when your frontal lobe ceases to function, permanently.
OK NOW IM WEARING A HELMET. ..PERMANENTLY
Nice story i'm hooked
I wear a hoodie now to hide my head, from the conversation a couple days ago I wear something to hide my frontol llbe
Lobe
5392222
Are you seriously that paranoid? To fracture the human skull, you would need AT LEAST 500 kilograms of force bearing down on it, all at once. That's why the Bite of '87 was so feared: It penetrated a defense of the human body that could withstand over half a ton of pressure before giving way. What's more, animatronics aren't meant to have very powerful endoskeleton joints to begin with, they're just there to provide a foundation for the costume. It's for this reason that the Bite would never happen.
Are you happy now? Oh and one more thing: A hoodie wouldn't do much, if at all. If you wore a military helmet, sure , but a piece of cloth around your head ain't gonna do jackshit.
Ok you know what forget it, just tell us when the next chapter is up
Haha the last part of your reply was hilarious haha
whoa that was a shocking twist
wow bright and fluttershy I never saw that coming.
grate chapter cant weight to see ware this will go next.
harts fire.
5414603 Glad to see that this chapter caught people off-guard. But I don't take any credit. Wildcard25 does, since he was the one who first came up with that idea.
please pass along my congratulation to him.
it is still a supper story.
Bright be all like dundundundun dun dun cant touch this ***dodges mare lunge***........ok maybe that whont help if they ALL did that but hey he's as fast as rainbkw so whats the worst that can happen........ I probably shouldn't have said that.
Also nice new avatar picture
5425872 Thanks. I like it too.
When's the next chapter? Im just asking but school is getting in your way because my winter break is over, school starts tommorrow
5491106 I know. I said this to another guy named deathbringer, but the next chapter will be out by the end of this month, at the absolute latest.
Hey random. Question have u played five nights at freddy's two
5506319 Why yes. Yes I have.
I realided I'm the only one commenting to this story........awkward
5530337 Eh, it's ok.
I'm glad Flutters got some love...also, I feel disturbingly glad that Bright has to run away from mares.
Nice chapter.
5576290 Thanks
hum this is going to get so good.
do I smell a rat in the works or more that I will keep to my self for now.
Harts Fire
Hmmm I wonder who that was...
Bro your story has a PERFECT beginning, your getting alot of positive reviews keep it up. :D
The last scene was like a train wreck, it makes you get that feeling of "oh no!" But you can't look away.
5654177 That a good or bad thing?
This seems to be like this fanfic: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10985990/1/Ladies-Man-on-Campus
5716461 Yeah, of course. This is a variation of that story.
I just caught it, in the lyrics for "The good left undone" you need to change the word hand to hoof.
5997677 I mentioned in the author's note that all the characters are anthro. That help clear things up?
oh please tell that fool wasn't ribbon dancing out in the open like that, if so may god have mercy on him because the girls sure as hell won't
I really enjoyed AJ's reaction to Bright exercising no her condition to keeping it a secret. Also, I loved watching Broght dealing with a mob of mares after his pants.
So, just started reading this. Should I expect long waiting updates?
6184741 Hopefully not. That last chapter gave me some SERIOUS headaches.
6184961 ok. Thanks a bunch