• Member Since 28th Mar, 2014
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MichelleTwistaloo


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Diamond Tiara didn't know it. But when applied to her, she finally understood. Sticks and Stones may break bones, yes, but words hurt too. Now she has to redeem herself, however the heck she can!

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Word of advice: This might improve if checked by a proofreader.

Short and simple. That's all I gotta say about this thing.

It is short and simple. The premise is still rather...intriguing. I find the narrative exquisite, as usual. You seem quite capable of having it shine through whatever you write!:raritystarry:
This flavour, at least, is delicious.:duck:

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