Aria Blaze does not like people. She'd much rather be in Equestria, a land where emotional magic is strong enough to give her and her sisters, Adagio Dazzle and Sonata Dusk, enough power to rule and do whatever. But, in a tangle, Aria finds herself banished into the harsh and magic-lacking world of the humans - That is, until she finds a book that will change... everything.
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Honestly, first thing I thought upon reading the description was Death Note.
5243396 Oh gosh. It's not that xD
5243628 Haha, I knew it wasn't—otherwise it probably would have been called "Aria's Death Note", but still.
This was... not very good. You moved through the story far too quickly. You need to take more time to flesh out the characters and events. Otherwise, it's going to be a boring matter of, "A thing happened, then another thing happened." It's just not very interesting to read a story set up like that.
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That's like my one flaw in writing. I still attempt to fix them, but my ideas always come out fast-paced... I'm trying... now, anyways, thanks for the reminder though.