The princess of friendship has endured many trials in her young life, but after casting a spell, she is reluctant to go forward with her appointment at Ponyville Hospital.
The writing was a little off putting, what with most sentences beginning with 'She' and some of them using incorrect punctuation, but that's alright to be honest. I enjoyed the story regardless. Thank you for writing it!
This... This is something I've wanted for awhile. Not the seeing or anything but male on futa on female is something I've surprisingly not found. Thank you, dear author, it was glorious.
it read like "in,out,finish"... much to short for a decent clop scene.
Other then that it's original enough. I don't think I ever saw a Futalight story with nurse redheart where Twilight got penetrated herself by a doctor.
Maybe more oral action, position-change, tag-teaming nurse redheart, etc. and it could have been good.
Stable smiled and nodded. “Forgive me.” He said with an apologetic tone as he rubbed his cock against Twilight's snatch. “Would this be your first time being vaginally penetrated?” Twilight chewed her lip and weakly nodded. “You're going to experience a moment of pain. What I want you to do is focus on the pleasure you're currently receiving.”
He's a doctor, he of all people should know that sex doesn't hurt the first time.
More like "Twilight Sparkle Gets Physical."
5255177
Ooohhh... That's a funny one right there!
But now... This was a highly entertaining story, one that I thoroughly enjoyed. A+
5255250
It was a very good story!
Great, now every time I read this I'm gonna here that song 'Let's Get Phsyical' XD
Wonder what other spells that book has? Specifically, ones that Cadance would use on Shining in combination with this one.
The writing was a little off putting, what with most sentences beginning with 'She' and some of them using incorrect punctuation, but that's alright to be honest. I enjoyed the story regardless. Thank you for writing it!
This... This is something I've wanted for awhile. Not the seeing or anything but male on futa on female is something I've surprisingly not found. Thank you, dear author, it was glorious.
5255177
The pun be real.
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5255420
Despite never having heard that song, I was considering naming it that, but then I thought of how cliched that would sound.
5255420
That's funny. I think "Bad Touch by, The Bloodhound Gang" is more appropriate for this fic .
5257155
I agree with you.
'Let's Get Phsyical' is not naughty and straight forward enought
5256591
A bit short, but a good show all round.
it read like "in,out,finish"... much to short for a decent clop scene.
Other then that it's original enough. I don't think I ever saw a Futalight story with nurse redheart where Twilight got penetrated herself by a doctor.
Maybe more oral action, position-change, tag-teaming nurse redheart, etc. and it could have been good.
5259177
I suppose I could extend it.
5256591 True, but still ya can't help but sing it to yourself XD
5257155 Never heard of it.
How come there are not more stories where a Herm is being penetrated while penetrating a vagina?! Or if there is, could you link me to one?
5259177 My fetish is a futa being vaginaly penetrated while penetrating another vaginaly. I have yet to read another fic of that...
5260340
[somewhat wrong inso many ways. But the PMV version]
I can't find the old amv version that I used to watch, and was the best video for that song. But that's the song.
5260715 You just described my ideal futa scene
5266604 I have a feeling I will as well.
5267803
whAT DID I JUST WATCH IM
5338559
Just what it seems :D
You would think she had read up plenty about it growing up for 'research' purposes. I can see first hoof experience though.
Doctor/Patient confidentiality Twilight.
That's not what she meant Redheart.
What does it look like? Really, think about it for a moment.
She's going to be getting a lot more action soon.
He's a doctor, he of all people should know that sex doesn't hurt the first time.