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While Lieutenant Captain Shining Armor gives Princess Luna her first taste of modern electronic gaming, an enemy within is playing a far more dangerous game with the Canterlot Royal Guard. Who will win in the end? You'll have to read to find out!
The Canterlot Chronicles: Season 1
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And how soon until Luna figures out she was given a old, outdated, video game system? plus I wanna see the five agents of Chaos get there right desserts.
Kind of figured on burning at the stake or impalement or something. Thats a suprisingly gentle execution for traitors.
5263444 Trying to keep this T-rated here. If I went any more gory, I would have to add a tag or bump up the rating.
great story and awesome series so far. Keep it up
You have my attention
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What are you, twelve? There's no such thing as an "outdated video game system." There are just well-designed systems and poorly designed systems.
Microsoft would have to pay me to use their xbone trash.
Celestia is happy that Luna is happy and Shining is helping her to be happy. Plus he is already on the payroll so she doesn't have to pay for a babysister sitter.
A single agent lost and betrayed essentially leaves no witness and no clues and its doubtful any other agents knew he even was one. A neat little package. Except for the horn removal, that can point towards a Pegasus I would think. But is it a clue or a leed in the wrong direction?
DOWN WITH THE TYRANY OF THE SOLAR EMPIRE!!!!!
Another of your earlier works I see. You really should rewrite this using normal past tense for the narrative, present tense isn't very appealing.
You called Celestia "he" in the last paragraph.
I assume the agents of Chaos were send to join their master in statue garden forever for their high treason.
I personally assume that Cadance and Twilight are planning to have Shining become an Alicorn too one day.
5263444 I had expected them to be turned to stone like Discord himself.
Those stallions are in over their heads they have no idea of the crazyness that's normal in Ponyville.
https://www.bing.com/videos/search?q=pmv+don%27t+mine+at+night&&view=detail&mid=11A949D048F0385D1FCF11A949D048F0385D1FCF&&FORM=VDRVRV
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Hey Xbox one is not Trash. Unlike the Wii U the Xbox one is a good video game system. Especially the S and X variants
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Try changing the color of your avatar and getting banned for "hacking", or playing a .mkv file. Consoles are nothing but insultingly limited-function and gestapo-policed PCs.
You go Fleur!