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Jerky #1 · Nov 6th, 2014 · · 1 ·

the fuck did i just read

5236637 Poorly-done rape clusterfuck made simply for wish fulfillment purposes by someone who has no clue how the flying Dutchman of a fuck to apply REALITY to his 'works'. In other words, arglebargle on computer paper.

Someone call the Marines cause my sides have been hijacked. (Ba Dum Tss!)

5236905 Preserving it now. :pinkiecrazy:
5236766 Who owns many fedoras?

I'm just gonna imagine that the rapist looks like this:
i.imgur.com/DMKaNZf.jpg
That makes the story slightly more bearable.

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Because after 3 other stories with shit like this, what's the most logical conclusion?

5236942 really you imagined cody rhodes/stardust doing this?

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It'd be a guy in a bad Stardust costume. Then at least the mental image will be a bit entertaining.

Frizzy #11 · Nov 7th, 2014 · · 1 ·

That was incredibly poorly written. Normally if I don't finish reading a story, I don't rate it. I only make exceptions for exceptionally terrible stories. This is one such exception.

And I noticed you released a few other stories. On the same day. With the same tags. And the same premise. And similar cover art. This is the only one I read, and the only one I will read. Based on the descriptions alone, I'm just going to assume they're all the same, you just changed which character you rape.

First of all, why did you wait until you had multiple stories finished to publish any? Pretty much any other author releases one story, looks at the reactions, and tries to improve. Not you, however.

Since it's clear that you care more about quantity over quality when you write, I am asking you to never write again. Yeah, I hate telling people not to do what they love, but it is painfully clear that you wrote this for your own enjoyment, not the enjoyment of others. If you wished to enetertain others, I would have seen more effort.

Thank you for continuing the stereotype that fanfiction is poorly written erotica (if you can call this monstrosity "erotic").

5236766 I bet they're all greasy, too.

Through tricks and an assortment of unethical (but totally legal) actions

I sure hope you aren't studying for the bar exam. :raritydespair:

Could you be any more obvious in your self-insert? Makes me curious what kind of dickless wonder you are in real life.

Go hang your computer and go back to school. Feel free to hit yourself while you're at it.

Utter garbage, improper grammar and a truly fucked up story. I am truly sorry this was ever posted.

What the hell is this shit? OP needs to learn how to actually write edgy rape erotica whenever he gets done sorting his fedora collection. Getting over his weird, Chris-Chan-esque sexual hangups (writing violent rape stories but censoring words like "cunt" and "fuck" in the description with stars and actually using words like "boobies" in the middle of the aforementioned violent rape stories, the smug self-insert OC that ruins the whole experience and reminds you that the author doesn't give a shit about actually making this entertaining for anyone but himself, unnecessary humanized, the unsettling attitude towards and portrayal of the act... the list goes on) would be a good start. Not to mention that all of these stories are almost the exact same and read like a fucking roleplay log from Omegle; Edgy Mcbadtouch manages to get the drop on one of them without a struggle because LOL WOMEN AM I RIGHT, generic prose and dialogue lifted straight from his favorite doujin, end the story with him flipping them over for doggy.

Sauce on the cover art he uses would be great tho

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Can you imagine if that had been a honey badger? Because, well...what the Hell would a honey badger run away from?

5236905
PRESERVE IT FOREVER!

Yeah, no. This has to stop.

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