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I'm actually having fun with the story even though some of the writing is a tad on the pretentious side. It's good to know I can at least write something decent outside the lowest common denominator(clop, shockfics...any humanised storys etc)
Good chapter, a nice filler, I am bit concerned though when she said that it will kill everyone outside. Does this mean that any and all that are trapped inside the time freeze will perish or maybe just the bearer of the spear? Or will there be a wider "blast" radius which will kill all those shes been trying to save?
it's nice to get a few laughs out of this chapter
Huh, nice back story.
I wonder why were there no changeling souls in there, or do the copy spears not transfer souls back to the original?
I wish there was more Chryssie in the story.
Cya
Raziel-chan