A Hero Of War (UNEDITED)

by DontWakeTheNeighbour

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Rainbow Dash’s mind went blank, she struggled to breathe, she felt as if the wind was knocked out of her. Slowly she opened her eyes, the sudden light grazed her senses before she realised that she was falling. Trying to open her eyes she found herself staring into the sun.
Using her wings to flip onto her stomach she could see the ground rapidly approaching, disorientated, drowsy, she tried to open her wings to glide. With one firm thrash, both her wing flared open as she looked at the ground. The trees, the buildings, the colours, she was back. A large grin spread across her face as she looked down, she was back and Bishop was at most a mile away.
As she descended she began to look for a place to land, unsure of how people would react if they saw her. She noticed how much more colourful and full of life the town was compared to the deserted wastelands she was used to before. She had a hard time believing that she was in the right world. She saw a small opening on a large building looking over the busy town, slowing down; she gently came to a stop before touching down.
She took a moment to breath, walking to the edge of the building, looking down to see the residents walking around. Smiling, talking, not fighting to the death, Rainbow Dash grew worried, taking off the element before putting it under her wing.

“This can’t be right. …. This can’t be the right place.”

She jumped onto the ledge before gliding into the alley between the building and the one next to it. She slowly walked towards the streets, staying in the shadows as she observed her surroundings. She poked her head out into the open before a couple passes her, to which she backed into the alley again. She took another look before she began to doubt if she’d ever see Bishop again.
Suddenly a large truck speeded past; she covered her ears as the engine roared past her, Rainbow Dash poked her head out again, seeing a large group of soldiers sat in the back of the vehicle. As a second one passed Rainbow Dash recognised the uniforms, without a moment’s hesitation she soared vertically into the air.
As she gained altitude her spirits raised just as quick, she levelled out before she began to follow the small convoy from a distance. She looked ahead to see the trucks approaching the coast where there was a large base, soldiers walking the docks, ships docked, trucks driving in all directions, she began to descend once again, looking around to make sure she wasn’t being watched, she was all too familiar with how cruel the world could be if she wasn’t careful. As much as she wanted to be able to walk the streets freely without having to be afraid, she just couldn’t bring herself to do so.
Touching down once again she sat next to a large rock, looking around to watch as the trucks drove into the crowded base. As the trucks drove away, Dash squinted her eyes as a small sign was revealed, spelling out the words.

‘Pearl Harbour’

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[BOBthieBomber]

SHE ARRIVED ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE PLANET....well....shit.

[Guardian]

Uh oh... Wait, has Pearl Harbor already happened? Because if it hasn't... Lord help Rainbow. And these chapter REALLY need to get longer. They're all barely over a thousand words. This was was SUPER short. Can you please make them longer? 849876 Oh, what am I thinking, it MUST have already happened.

[Mes Amis]

Back to back you say? You wouldn't happen to be held captive by a specific fan would ye?

[501st Party Brigade]

849874 Agreed. I'll get the mops you get the plungers. Meet back in five. Also, wear a raincoat.

[Muhanoid]

500 words is not enough for a chapter, but... Great for "teaser". More violence. More sorrow and regret. Will Dash stay sane? Stay tuned for next episode!

Great work at keeping interest at maximum levels.

[DontWakeTheNeighbour]

849887 This one was short because I wanted to drop a bomshell. (No pun intended) Instead of carrying on. I though it would have a better impact the dragging it on for a while.

[Wise2Fox]

Oooooooh crab! Now she WILL have to take him to equestria dood.

And dood put the tag Romance because its a Bish x Dash and i will be awwww~

[DontWakeTheNeighbour]

850016 Sry. No shipping in this story.

[Wise2Fox]

850070
*grabs a thick twig and snaps it in half* Now ...... think of this has your health insurance ~

[Thardoc]

pearl harbor... oh gob

[Jimmy Russels]

Well shit

[Tie RoamingHooves]

DAAAYYYYYYUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMMMM

[Longshot]

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[Longshot]

There are a few spelling errors. You said tucks as upposed to trucks at one point and spelled Pearl Harbor as Pearl Harbour. Even if harbour it is the English spelling of harbor, it is spelled Pearl Harbor as it is a proper noun.

[Firebolt]

now the question is did she arrived before or after the Japanese attack cause the tardis could go wonky (a common occurrence) could actually send her to a different time.

[Freescript the Bard]

Oh, buck.

[CyberCommand]

847505 why you no include all wonder weapons pack a punched along with mustang Sally's

[BrotherConsus]

The winds are steadily rising and the fecal activity is surging!!!

[Codexwriter476]

849919 I'll bring the buckets.

[DezzarTac]

neat. now make the chaps longer, and I wanna see whats next

[Low-quality memes]

BANZAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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[Zyggy]

You never, EVER say your in this story, always you're.
Why.

[501st Party Brigade]

850991 Good cause we are gonna need a shitload of them.

[n1zk]

please for the love of god don't go there....
he must come back to equestria!
safely!

[ghostlywolf]

prep for combat!!

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[DontWakeTheNeighbour]

853376 What?

[Zyggy]

853968
When I was reading your story it was (and still is) this HUGE mess of grammatical errors.
You have almost never used your in this story, and instead always used you're.
"Auf die Knie. .... AUF DIE KNIE!! .... ON YOU'RE FUCKING KNEES!!"
"Put you're teeth on the fucking curb. .... Beiß in den Bordstein!"
That's what I found in a quick scan of chapter ten
"If I didn't kill them they would have most certainly have killed you're little furry freak. If anything it's that cunts fault."
that's in chapter 11
"Trust me Bishop, I may not be you’re friend but you sure as fuck don’t want to have me as an enemy"
And here's a huge one.
"So right now, you can take you’re bullshit threats, you’re bullshit excuses and you’re bullshit attitude to someone who gives the slightest fuck what you think!!"
Chapter 16
Oh, and you often say was instead of were, for some odd reason.
It's a great story, but just full of little issues in the writing.

[The Wake]

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Rainbow Dash just can't get a break.

[Mr_Anderson]

hey ! thats where I live! my grandpa saw the entire attack on pearl harbour from his front porch!
Have you ever been to hawaii cause I will be very judgmental on how you discribe the place.

[Dave from finances]

852107
Banzai literally means "Ten thousand years of life" in Japanese. It is only a war cry when in this form, "Tennouheika banzai!" which means, "Long live the Emperor!"

[Dave from finances]

853758
Are those pencils?

[Sierrastrike]

If only the bombs were bullets.

[Rainbow87dash]

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[Rainbow87dash]

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[The Commandant]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...

[DrWhooves007]

‘Pearl Harbour’

[Nh_Bleker97]

Lol Peal Harbour, what a lovely......... OH NO!!!!!!!!!