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Rarity suggests to give Applejack and Fluttershy a small makeover. Just a change of their mane styles, and nothing else. Nopony would've thought that just changing that would cause them to change completely. Chaos ensues, and Fluttershy and Applejack's best friends now fight against the clock to change them back to normal.
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MWAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HAIR CHANGE=PERSONALITY CHANGE
Only In Equestria folks, Only in Equestria!!!!!!!!!
A whole lot of cussing and OOC moments from the characters that didn't change their hair. It's random, but meh...
5229692 Actually, it doesn't seem so far fetched. If someone like Fluttershy uses her hair to shield her face. If that shield were taken away it wouldn't be unreasonable to think she's act more assertive.
AND/OR...
If Applejack looked in the mirror and thought like "Ah kinda look like Fluttershy.", so she keep that in mind, what is Fluttershy known for for? Being shy, that might lead to Applejack being more shy. I see similarities with the expression "Becoming the mask".
In theory... It wouldn't be this extreme of a change. I'm in no way professional or in training.
5231528 REVERSE PSYCHOLOGY OR NOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THAT IS THE QUESTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Zeyon kinda summed up my points. Intresting if f ar fetched premise, not badly written but with a few noticble flaws, the ooc and the cussing in particular..all kinda adds up to a meh. Have a upvote cause I think you should keep writing.
It has now been edited with less cursing. Not COMPLETELY GONE, but a significant amount to be noticed.
I liked it
sequel with rarity and rainbow dash 
The only pony who was in character was Apple Bloom and maybe Granny Smith. Everyone else wasn't themselves. At least Applejack and Fluttershy had an excuse. Reactions were way over dramatic to the point where I thought I had misread something, or thought a different character was speaking entirely. Far too much cursing. Too much yelling in all caps. Double exclamation marks are iffy.
I don't think it is even possible for Pinkie to talk like this.
Was funny. Good job there.
I did like the idea, but it was an awful read.
2/12
5734435 Yeah, looking back on this, I'm not really too proud of this anymore. I'm probably gonna take it down and do some heavy editing, or just leave it off for good. Thanks for the comment though. Any criticism is appreciated.
I found this to be hilarious.
I'd love it if this concept appeared in the show itself.