Just as Rainbow Dash is about to drift off to sleep, a sound pulls her from the brink, and she decides to investigate.
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KalenNighteyes
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KalenNighteyes
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Well this was certainly a worthwhile reading. Good Twidash works can be hard to find at times.
AWWWW, that was a adorable yet, short
. Luv it all t same 
Definitely worth a read! Nice, short, simple, and sweet.
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Agreed. Nothing wrong with a short sweet happy story. Too many authors think they need conflict and drama to make a story good.
This story brings a smile to my face and that's all I can ask for and more than many stories deliver.
Wonderful. Fluffy, cute, and sweet. I need more fics like this in my life.
A lovely short piece that oozes adorable TwiDash. Once again brilliant Kalen :)
Defiantly one of the best/shortest Twidash fics I've read. Keep makin' great stories.
It's only a little over thousand words, but gets right to the point and feels.
5229218 I'm very glad that you enjoyed reading this story. TwiDash is something that can be hard to find good works of, but there are good ones out there!
5229360 Adorable was what I was going for
Short is something I was okay with, because I felt it didn't need to be any longer than this. I'd already done what I set out to do. Thank you so much for reading this 
5229720 Thank you for reading it! I know it was short, but I think it still worked :D
5229996 Yes! I agree with you! I have a couple stories
(most of them)here that I tried to throw in drama and conflict, but this one... I felt I could keep it short and simple, and still have an impact. At least I was hoping that it would5230153 I'm glad you enjoyed it, because I really enjoyed writing this story. Even though I'm my own worst critic, I still found this story d'awwable
5230178 D'awww... Thank you. I'm glad that you, an amazing writer, liked it and it makes me happy to know you that you did
5230206 Thank you for reading it! I will do my best to keep writing great stories
5230556 I figured short and sweet was better with a story like this one. Thank you for reading it
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n' here's hopin that things stay great in future ventures 
Ur very welcome
So much cute... I like first person narratives and they work really well for one-shots or short stories. This story used simple effects to deliver a confession of love: Twilight's humming and Rainbow Dash's sleepiness, but she is unable to go to sleep until she has spoken her mind and then we get the L-word.
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I'm glad you enjoyed the story! I just wanted to write something simple. Sometimes simple is better than a long, complicated story. Thank you for reading this 
AHHHHHHH! I JUST DIED OF CUTENESS!
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Glad you liked it 
Engine room, Daawwww Factor 11! :D
Nice job!
Not bad! You can never go wrong with TwiDash!
5232737 I'll send flowers.
THE FEELS OMG!!! The feel are strong with this one!!!!!!!
Thsi was so amazing im not evn going to bother fixing my own grammegr with this domment.
Good job sir, you ar eawesome
Liked and favorited!
5235057 :D Adorable is what I was going for! Kudos for Star Wars reference ;)
5235152 I got the gist of what you were saying :P Glad you enjoyed the story!
5235230 Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I let out the longest "d'aw" that ever came out of my mouth. I loved it! It's just so so, adorable! I love it!
What was the Star Wars reference
As much as I can't see Twilight and Dash working out like this, D'awwww!
So much D'awwwwww
*Heart stops from cuteness overload and dies*
-ALL MY FAN GIRLS SCREAMED INSIDE ME- to much ~dies~
Aww.
I died of adorableness.
These short TwiDash stories are so sweet and causes too much smiling.
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I love it.
This was simply a sweet and cute little story that was fun to read and to keep in my favourites (should I want to read it again, which I will). I also love Twi/Dash as a pairing. Thank you for writing this little fluffy gem of a read!
-frost
5669050 I'm glad that you liked it. I aim to produce more of these kinds of stories in the future. Thanks for reading it
*Twilight humming to Dash, fade to black*
*Dash slowly opens her eyes, hearing Rarity humming*
Rarity: Oh, you're finally up, huh? You slept too much, you've been asleep three days. Yeah, I was starting to worry about you. Hey, you should be grateful to me for staying here.
*Dash struggles, signals her to come closer*
Dash: You sing off key.
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I could totally see this being a part of some ponified version of Ballad of Fallen Angels from Cowboy Bebop.
6108190 LOL! I totally agree!
Such perfect Sparkling Rainbow d'aw!
6432336 Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for the favorite too!
Simply beautiful =3
For some reason, I heard "Auprès de ma Blonde" in my head reading this. Thinking back, it fits.
This is the longest time I have ever said 'Dawwwww'.
The story was Featherin Adorkabe!!!
7936725 I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading!
No...no!...must...resist the-*dies*
*Cuteness overload*
This story makes me sad, knowing i'll never experience love like this