This story is a sequel to Birthday Surprises
A band of pirate ponies make port in Manehattan. Looking for some quick bits and a big payout, they fillynap a certain human from a specific pair of mares and hold him ransom. Or is it human-napping?
Derpy and Vinyl want to find a way to get Justin back, before the pirates do something bad happens to him. Justin, on the other hoof, has plans of his own for these would-be human-nabbing pirates.
Probably a short story for whatever reason I feel it should be.
[WARNING: There is no warning!]
Not bad.
5233847 I feel like you're waiting for something bad... could be me being falsely paranoid for no reason.
Nope, just saying it was good start of a story and it was funny of your human character scaried the bejuses out of a crew member like a Freddy C. Movie scene if that was what your going at in that one scene.
5235062 Well... intentional for my human to scare that one pony, yes. A scene from Freddy, probably not intentional as Liberty Prime.
Haha I can agree with that.
5236268 You will see what I have planned for the next chapter though. I find it pretty amusing.
Sweet can't wait to read what you have in stored.
Is this mlp or the three stooges/marxs brothers show
justin is to funny I was laughing the whole time. Keep it up man
Hahaha now I was not expecting that. What the hay did he use anyway . Well till next time party on dude.
5402962 What the device is.. I have no idea yet. At first I wanted it to be some kind of bubblegum shooter. XD
Anyway, thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying what story I can put out.
Okay only thing to donin that situation *anime faceplant ala ramma 1/2
that was to funny a true trip into insanity cant wakit till the next one
there will be more rigt justin to much fun not to do more please
5422161 We may just have to see.