BatTroll, initiate!

Couple of minor errors I found:

your grip on her nibble

nipple

sending you mind reeling

your

The batpony at the end is adorable btw.

Turning your head to the side, your stare at the edge of your bed in trepidation. Your eyes widen in horror as, slowly, a pair of yellow, cat-like eyes peer over the edge of the bed, tufted ears twitching excitedly.
”Anon~!”
holy shit are bat ponies part time ninjas?

5219359 yes. Yes there are

Again, nice chapter. I liked the bat pony coming out of nowhere at the end.
I did find a small error though.

head tilted to the side and mouthing [mouth] hanging open.

"ing" souldn't be at the end of the word "mouth".

5219359 I must have one, I bet they make the best of cuddle partners and spies.

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holy shit are bat ponies part time ninjas?

No, don't be stupid. They are professional ninjas. What did you think the night guard was for? Nightmare Night escorts?

Lil anon is freee

"Suckling upon your member like a nursing foal" What the fuck is this shit?! WHY ARE NURSING FOALS SUCKING HIS DICK?!

“Sorry, can't brain. Think not working,”

Just gotta love dazed people and mixed words.

I loved it all it had me cracking up. I can't wait to se what happens next.

it would've been more hilarious if he lay back on the bed, looked up, and saw the entire ceiling covered in batmares.

5242726 LOL never thought about that :D

So...was the batpony there the entire time?

5219134 the batpony ain't cute it is just plain creepy in this instance any other time they just fine

“Ever since you revealed why you were late to inspection, I’ve had all of the mares in the guard asking for my assistance!”

Is this a problem for you? A dozen batmares...

“What’s so bad about that?” Gleaming asks, returning the glare. “You’re a male, aren’t you? You should be enjoying all the attention! Any of the stallions in the guard would jump at the chance!”

Very true. On all points.

Don’t want anymore of those blasted batponies sneaking in.

I do!

They also tend to bite when you’re… “helping” them. The bandages all over your thighs are proof enough to that.

It's not that big of a deal.

”Fix. Them.”

Aggressive. Yay.

”You and your clothing fetish,”

Clothing, for humans, is the opposite of a fetish.

Your eyes widen in horror as, slowly, a pair of yellow, cat-like eyes peer over the edge of the bed, tufted ears twitching excitedly.
”Anon~!”

Now he's gonna get blown by every mare guard he helps.

Blasted batponies! They drive me to... Aw hell with it. They're adorable!

6115077 agreed

Your eyes widen in horror as, slowly, a pair of yellow, cat-like eyes peer over the edge of the bed, tufted ears twitching excitedly.

”Anon~!”

Well, SOMEpony enjoyed a show!

5232285 Yes

That was perfection, hahahaha! Batponies!

Does this really count as a clop-fic?
Or is it just dirty comedy?

5507985 And then said, "...well, damn."

5219359 Bat ponies are full time ninjas.

Your eyes slowly close, and you begin to drift off to sleep...

you stare at the edge of your bed in trepidation.

Batponies are really ninjas

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Be one with the shadow's~