Don't let the marble and gem encrusted streets of Canterlot fool you. It's a city filled with secrets. In Folklore's first job for the Equestrian Government he sees the truth of the world, a truth forgotten in the name of harmony.
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Interesting dagger: what design is that? And which one's the pointy end? I legitimately can't tell.
Finally got around to rereading this. I have to say, I like the shorter chapters: makes things significantly easier to digest! And the story is still as good as I remember!
My one major critique is that you go a bit fast at times, introducing new concepts in quick successions. While it's not a serious problem, I find that it leaves me struggling to keep up at times. Thankfully, there's no in-depth exposition or details, but it's still a bit bizarre for the character to suddenly go "I have a familiar now!" "Now I have a dagger!"
I'm still enjoying this just as much, if not more than I did the first time around! Looking forward to more!
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Thank you, thank you, thank you!
The Dagger is a petrified piece of wood tied with animal tendons to the broke top half of a Hyperborean slashing sword. It has embedded ancient magical power and an animalistic will of it's own, I wanted to keep that card close to me until the end but I revealed it anyway here. The blade was found by a paleolithic Zebra Shaman who made it's hilt and used it as his personal weapon and passed it down his bloodline for generations until it was extinguished. Figures from King Gilgamesh to Heracles have wielded it but it got lost in the sands in North Zebrica, it was found in an expedition by the Royal Canterlot Museum of Natural History some twenty years before Luna Returns and kept as part of it's Zebrica Exhibit. Luna noticed it's peculiar nature and gave it to Folklore because she considered it a decent weapon, and she didn't care that it was in a museum.
I was going to reveal this at the end as a minor conversation point but now you know.