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MylittleDashie
whats up i wont take shit from no one and no matter what i will love everypony
MylittleDashie
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FIRST! For once i am ze first commentatorer person on a story!
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This is an interesting idea. So the main character helped raise Rainbow Dash? I shall have to continue reading.
So far........... The Angry Brony approves
Still interesting so far but I think I've spotted a few grammar ad spelling errors. For example..........
"Princes Celestia HAS chosen pony Ville to RISE the sun in this go round….”
I suppose Rainbow Dash means HAS and RAISE?
Still......... Interesting. I would recomend longer chapters. A little more time spent on character developement throughout the story would make this a lot better in my amateur opinion. I can't wait to find out what the "accident" was...........
How old is this recently abandoned filly that she's already speaking like that?
I thought that she promised not to get killed?
........ for now.....
"She promised that she would get herself killed".....
Hhmmmm....... Not the best story I've seen so far but still holding my interest.
The Angry Brony still approves
Ok now you're starting to lose me. Feels like the story is progressing a little to fast with too little time for me to realy absorb the story. Perhaps you could slow it down and lengthen the chapters.
The Angry Brony......... still approves....... for now.
Haha it was my first story and I sorta gave up on it sort of but I guess I can work on it
you should really take a look at my story harmony between two melodies...
I wrote the story title wrong for it though so look up harmony between to melodys 
it's alot better from what I've been told