About a week after the defeat of the Dazzlings, the latest threat to Canterlot High, one of its members shows up out of the blue. Of course, she is shunned and rejected by almost everyone. Everyone except Sunset Shimmer... and me.
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You know, I've been reading this since you first release it, and I am surprise this far in that no one had put a comment down. Like really, this is a good story, a unique take to it, how come no one said that yet.
Sigh!
Good story btw.
Thanks Dreagknight I really appreciate that! Made my night actually
6399966 No problem, just only spoke the truth.
Rea-hea-heally starting to dislike this Silver Point fella. Not sure what to think of Aria's part in it, though.
Somebody oughta tell at least one of the ladies what's going on.
Great, NTR in the house, tell me when Lost go berzerk on Silver Ass.
My bet is, he set Silver up so he confess cheatung, rainbow hears, Silver attacks Lost, Aria tries to stop him and get smacked in the head, Lost get saved and aria recovera her memory.
P.S.: the only reason im writing this is because stories that have thhus cheating aspect makes me sick and talking about ut helps alot.
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That's not too far off from what I have in mind
But no spoilers for you
6430110 phew, good thing i didnt go for my original idea, this doesnt look like the supernatural story, as far as MLP can go, next chapter next week?
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I should have about two out before the end of the week
Son of a mitch
that was pretty dumb of him to just talk... but then conflicts, we needs it.
Great chapter man
oh i want to see how this all turns out
Lol, wow!
Oh, thank God! I thought Aria would be evil again!
im happy now
Let the hammer of Justice strike him!!!!
Is this legit?
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Wassamatter?
6442591 Wouldn't others, besides Lost, know of the cheating boyfriend. Wouldn't the dazzling know, given how they are keeping an eye on Aria?
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A. They're not exactly keeping an eye on her. They were wary at first because they thought she'd been magically tampered with, but after they found that it was nothing but a concussion, they let up. You can see how during the Competition, Aria mainly hung around Sunset and the other Rainbooms rather than the Dazzlings.
B. Had they noticed that Aria had a new boyfriend, they don't know that he's Rainbow's boyfriend. The most they know of Rainbow is that she's a part of the band that defeated them and that's it.
Lmao, love this story.
Yay, you are back, loved the way you are taking the story, particularly the punishment in the previous chapter.
I really hope there will be some development with his new found emotions, and some development with Rainbow Dash. Keep up the good work!
yeah!!
Uh, oh...
Shit, he got fucked.