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Lucefudu


Iatrogenesisist extraordinaire!

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With the power of true love, Shining Armor was able to cast his powerful spell and ensure the safety of Canterlot once more. But as Chrysalis, Queen of the Changelings is blown away by this great magical surge, she notices something -- a presence revealing itself only to her -- that both scares and ires her.

[Cover image by CrappyUnicorn]

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 21 )

This is just kinna, the end of the finale, in words.

Expects comment rage over the fact that it's another fic about the Changelings.
Notice it is by Lucefudu.
I have only this to say:
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503238 Eeeenope.

503243 At least, y'know... she isn't falling in love or anything. :rainbowlaugh:

503256
Eeyup:eeyup:
Someone needs to do a fic where she won and ended up with him.
Or is she allready with him?

And the plot thickens to the point of oatmeal.....

503322 OATMEAL??? ARE YOU CRAZY?!?!?!? I thinks it's more like porridge.

Why is there spam in the comments? ...Oh, wait. It's Lucefudu. I see.

ASPARAGUS

503544 When was I dubbed a spam magnet?

Okay, so my understanding is another changeling managed to disguise himself/herself/itself as Shining?

Other than that, to be completely honest, it just adds a bit of 'what if' to the ending of the finale... nothing wrong with that, but there's not much else. :twilightsmile:

503558 When you started to be popular and awesome :rainbowkiss:
I really did not like this particular bit of writing, you seemed to have done the original fanficion thing and merely rewrote the episode on a particularly interesting part.

Wai :fluttershysad:

504545 Thing is, I do know this is very different from my usual stuff. I know that the ending gets the reader pent up, but when he reads the "Complete" status it feels like I threw a middle finger on his face.
This would be a very good prologue for a real story. But I decided to leave it as it is; to force the reader to interpret what happened as he pleases and to force him into imagining what will happen next (if he wants to, that is).
You could say that this was another experiment of mine... just less... experimental per se.

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I actually have something in the works for what happens to our dear insect queen after she lands, something about a vaguely defined and described male HiE comfort thing. May attempt a clop scene for some reason, no idea how that will work.

I have no idea!
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504969 As long as you kill the human afterwards! :rainbowlaugh:

505081 Ooh, that sounds like fun.

Howabout I work in that draining love from a pony is easily done, they naturally love everyday of their long lives but humans on the other hand only have so much before their mind collapses.

Unrelated:

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Whoa ho! Chrysalis has a rival! :rainbowwild:

CRUD! Now I am gonna be amused if Chrysalis found out she got a rival and the Real Shining Armor is held hostage.......

THE SANITY JUST LEFT THE BUILDING:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

A king chageling? :pinkiecrazy: THE SHOCK And the plot thickens even MOOOOOAR! :pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp: I like this idea... :=:pinkiehappy:

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