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Quick Wit -Littlepip-


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It's Trixie's and Rainbow's first Nightmare Night, and they're hoping for the perfect one. But with a duo like this, hardly anything can go as planned. So what's gonna happen? Surely fate couldn't be that cruel.

(I'd love to thank my amazing friend for the picture. Drew it specifically for me. And in case anyone was urious, Rainbow Dash and Trixie are supposed to be dressed as each other. If anyone would like to vector it, I'd love you forever!)

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Comments ( 11 )

I think you mean "Just The Beginning".:unsuresweetie:

5213695 Of all my errors, it's the title that I screw up...

Where did you get the icon for your avatar?

5215645 If I remember correctly, it was deviantart. Can't remember which account or picture name. But it's something similar to "Pony Trixie in Equestria Girls clothes"

Well, then! Short and fun, the two things I love in oneshots.:twilightsmile:
I noticed a couple of minor errors, but small enough not to take away from the good story.

“You’ve been in there so long that Scoots learned ta fly and Sweetie Belle is on her death bed!”

I... I don't think I've ever laughed harder. Bravo, good sir, bravo.

5218914 With the new notification system I seem to miss a few comments. But glad you laughed xD! And it ain't much of a one-shot. :twilightblush:

Nice beginning, here. A spooky and ominous way to end the chapter. :eeyup:

*Striker slaps Pinkie upside the head* Don't act like that!

Not bad, Pinkie notwithstanding. One thing, though...

But the fact they had an alicorn among them just made it harder not to notice there presence.

That should be 'their'.

5240064 Ahhhh tthanks for that, I shall fix >.<

Scootaloo grumbling under her breath.

“Can’t believe this was the only lousy line I got…”

Scootaloo have you been spending to much time with pinkie?

Somepony needs to come up in a clown costume and sing I go looney. That will bring a scare.

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