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After being humiliated in Ponyville, The Great and Powerful Trixie needs to get back on her hooves. Fortunately, she gets help but from a very unlikely source.

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Comments ( 10 )

Nice story, Simple yet touching!

and once more Rarity┬┤s Generosity gives her the title "best Pony"
oddly enough, i could see her doing this without much fantasy.

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Thanks! That's exactly what I was going for! :pinkiehappy:

Very nice, simple and moving - showcasing both Trixie's remorse and Rarity's generosity and willingness to help someone in need of a friend. Overall, a good story with a simple idea which you developed beautifully.

Frostwyrm

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Wow Thanks...I really appreciate that! This is my first fan fic and with comments like this, It makes me want to write some more! :pinkiesmile:

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I try to review as honestly as I can, while giving positive feedback to the author on how to fix errors/structure/characterisation/technique if required - but here, there is very little I need to say and I am almost glad about it! :twilightsmile:
I completely agree with Dostoron, I can very easily visualise this happening without any difficulty and none of the dialogue/action seems OOC. Well done.

Frostwyrm

(There are over half a million comments posted on FiMFiction... apparently we have a lot to say!)

It's surprising how many people forget that Trixie did actually lose EVERYTHING that night. Her home was destroyed, her reputation tattered and her life a mess. You managed to resolve all of those issues in a single chapter and featured my two favourite ponies together as well. I applaud you sir on a job exceedingly well done!

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Thank you very much! It's great that you liked it so much! :pinkiehappy:

I can't resist me a good Rarity fic.
Well done mate, I really enjoyed this :twilightsmile:

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