Four months have passed since the events of "A Heart Divided". Fluttershys birds have been dying mysteriously, and she has to race to get a cure. Rainbow dash has to help Fluttershy break through the sadness.
NOTE: This is my first attempt doing anything sad, so please tell me how I did!
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Really cute story. I found no problems grammar or spelling if you were worried about it. I liked characterizations of RD and Flutters, feels really genuine to the. show. I really liked this one. Hope to see more in this series.
When I am on a computer and not my phone, I'll send you the full list of errors I found. Overall though, a very nice concept.
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Glad you enjoyed it! I really wanted to get the overall feel that this really affected Fluttershy, did that come through in the story?
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Grammatical errors please and thank you :P Glad you liked it
499531 It came through great. You really put her through a tough time. Good thing she had Rainbow with her.
Loved this fic!
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UMADBRO *Trollface*
501823 YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MAD I AM. FANFICTION IS SRS BSNS!!!!1111one
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Lol! The only reason i used that name is because i couldn't think of a name by myself, and i have been watching naruto recently.
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Glad to hear it!
513616 Personally and flutterdash is more beutiful than any other shipping and i hope we see a wedding fic
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No promises, but keep your eyes peeled :)
Great story! <3 I love flutterdash storys i think there the best.
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Glad you enjoyed it! :D