The Elements of Insanity have been reborn into the world after an accident with Twilights spell. They all get teleported to a world of humans, spirits, and dark magic. Each get taken by a spirit, and become a monster of insanity. The six try and find a way to get back to Equestria to overthrow Celestia and become the surpreme rulers of insanity!
(Twilight is not an Alicorn in this one! At least not in the beginning)
P.S. All rights go to Hasbro and I do not own The Elements of Insanity idea. Well, after the transformation of all of them, the rest of the plot goes to me.
Rated T because contains some swearing. (Don't worry I dont go all out.) :P
Chapters (7)
MOAR! I really enjoyed the story. Keep it up!
BEINGS OF THE WORLD OF INSANITY! The World of Illogic is here to help!
Okay shorter than i thought, to be honest i thought i would read already about the change from the elements.
It is not bad, i read more to early to say much right now.
I definitly like the idea, it looks like a dark tag story, which i could enjoy again. I don´t like those story´s which are only about Spike kills everypony and goes home or something like that, i want a story around the dark tag. I don´t know if i make sense right now, but you just have to know that i think i could like your story, i should not right comments that late because i always feel like i don´t know what i want to write if i do it around midnight.
PS: I think i would like it if they really be able to rule the world. I like Pinkamina, but i would like her a bit inteligent, not only crazy. I mean if Twilight want to control her it could help if Pinkamina has a good working brain. I just wanted to be sure with Pinkie there.
I might make both her and Rainbow smart, because Rainbow is a robot and it only makes sense.
I like what you did with Rarity, i like Fluttershy as Banshee or what she is right now as well, but i would prefer a female Voice still.
I am not sure what Applejack did there, i think it could be maybe a bit more clear particularly. I am not sure with english grammar, but maybe the sentences about Applejack are not that well, i just wanted to say it looks like it isn´t right but i don´t know it better.
Pinkie is more or less like Pinkamina right?, the Cutiemark is not the same and i like it.
At first i didn´t know what to think of Rainbow Dash as a Robot, but after two or three minutes i realized that it is something new for me and i like it very much, i only saw a Mecha Dash pircture about her and maybe a video about something like that if i remember it right.
i hope Twilight is turning evil too, right now she probably is very mighty if she is still alive. I just asume she is something like the God of death.
PS: I think i heard of a name for that Applejack, Applepills? Is she something like her or did you make you own Applejack there?
I have no probleem with that, bt maybe the whole world is a bit to much, but i would believe that it would maybe even melt a brain somehow. I know that i saw something like this in my past, i mean in some story or movie.
It maybe looks like that would be not much, but to be able to summon nearly everything, can be dangerous i believe. Sometimes Powers like this one, are more dangerous than a giant flamethrower would be.
It somehow makes sense, if she now has a maschine brain or is she a chyborg-pony thing?
I only understand that she is drug-addicted and strong.
I don´t have a problem with that, but if she needs to eat hearts, this could be a problem if they want to rule, someday she definitly has no people or ponys to eat anymore. Hhhhmmm Well think she can still eat the hearts or meat of the animals and a few choosen ponys. I just believe they maybe need a few Ponys to rule them. Maybe you should change it, so she have to eat a huge amount of raw flesh, if she really only eats the human/ponys hearts, then the population die to fast.
good one
I think i get used to her name and start to like it, nice idea.
Well i think my favourite are Rarifruit, Rainbrine and well i guess Brutalight Sparcake (i always want to call her Brutalight Sparkcake.) I like Derpy but to be honest in this one story this three are my favourites at the moment.
I don´t like Pinkies Name that much but well, i don´t know how difficult this could be to write, but take your time and make it a long story
I still like the idea of the story. To be honest i thought Twilight would get angry with them or start to punish Rainbrine for a moment, in the and she could still forgive her because she wasn´t in controle back there. Please make Twilight a bit well.....i don´t want that she punished them everytime, but i want her to get angry with them sometimes.
I think that was everything i can say at the moment, thank you for the new chapter, this is maybe still the prolog but i like it.
I think i need to read it more than once to understand how they rooms looks like and who sleeps where, but other than that i like it, even if it wasn´t that much. I think i like how they act, but maybe Derpy was falling one time to often. I have to say i like a certain joke with fire, but maybe it was the person which made me like that. What i mean is everything even tea or a clock would just start to burn because the person repaired it or touched it, i had to think about that because of Derpy here.
I like how they are acting, even if i think they are probably a bit bold toward their leader, i think there are times when Brutalight make it clear why she is the leader
It is to late for me to go more into the details, but be sure i like it.
I don´t know, maybe Discord as an late enemy would be more interessting, i just don´t want that it is to easy for them to take over Equestria.
Well i would like to see how Spike and the others would react if they could see them now, but i guess it should not happen to soon, that hey arrive in Ponyville, but in the same time i don´t know how long you should let them stay in the Human World.
I don´t mean it bad, but i don´t have other words for it right now.
I know this is not the best story i read at the moment, but in this story there is not really something i don´t like, and it is really good for me in it´s own way.
Do you go thru an editor? Because there alot of spelling mistakes here.
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This was one of my first stories. Not my best, obviously.
Sorry meant to say no offence. But when's the next chapter?
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None taken. But, I'm working on a chapter for each of my stories now.
You missed some parts ya know...orig05.deviantart.net/9eb9/f/2011/226/7/8/fluttershy_is_serious_by_crunchnugget-d46kvde.png
do you still write this story?
Actually, "Rainbrine's" name is Rainbine. There's no second r.
Hmm, I think Rainbrine should be Rainbine. It sais here:
and it sounds better.
6557286 true dat
Smooth, writing ^_^ time to get hooked on it!
First comment on this chapter!!!!!!! Also I love your style, though if you even need an editor I'd be happy to help ^_^
Hey, if you ever need an editor, I'm always happy to help other bronies and pegasisters ^_^
Will you be continuing this story?
before i read pinkie say it was under d I thought she would.
More please.
Thinking
