After disobeying her sister, Luna angrily decides to separate from Celestia and form a republic. However, Celestia's son, Prince Starlight, has also decided to forge his own government. However, as these three kingdoms live separately from each other, a dark threat emerges with a plan to throw all of Equestria into darkness.
Kudos to Faith-Wolff, whose image is not only awesome, but also helped inspire me to write this story.
(Sex tag is for hints of sexual intercourse, but nothing explicit or graphic. Gore tag is for blood, but no guts or carnage).
Chapters (4)
Can't wait for the next chapter! Looks pretty good so far, but PLEASE don't make starlight a Mary sue.
5218648 um...what's a mary sue?
A Mary sue is a character that's boring but is PERFERCT IN EVERY WAY.
For instance, when Twilight became an alicorn, they thought she would be a Mary Sue because they thought that she wouldn't be their nerdy bookworm anymore.
5219499 good to know; also, don't worry. Even though I made starlight the perfect little Boy Scout, there will be some things that he is not
Good.
I got worried when you said Starlight was the result of a forbidden love between Celestia and King Sombra from another dimension. Since he was from two worlds, his magic was extremely powerful. He was also the bearer of the unknown Element of Harmony: Hope. Ever since he had returned from the Royal Equestrian Academy in Saddle Arabia two years ago, he had shown great wisdom and courage in the face of danger.
That just SCREAMED Mary sue.
5219566 Trust me, starlight was never meant to be a Mary sue. He will obviously show his own flaws later on in the story.
Hey, I'm actually writing my first fic with the same concept right now, any pointers?
5224472 Equestrian war?
Uh...Comet? What exactly happpened here? I really have no idea what just happened.
5404313 To be honest, I don't know where I'm going with this story. I am almost considering changing the "hiatus" tab into the "cancelled" tab.
5693410 I'm sorry to hear that, but I hope you still continue!
I have high hopes for this fic!