Cover art by Dawn Dreamer from Lunar Echoes
If you were to ask him, how he ended up in Equestria, he would answer that he didn’t know, nor care, not any more. You see, for Masao, all he cared about was serving his goddess, his princess. However, if you were to ask him how he came to be her ever loyal servant, her ever valiant and honorable Knight in shining armor, he would laugh and send you on your way. For our purposes however, we will explore the entirety of his life, from a little before the time he met his princess, to now. So pull up a chair, sit back and enjoy the story of the Lunar Knight, the only everlasting Knight of Equestria, the only good soul that practices black magicks with the approval of the crown, Ser Masao Darkheart…
Warnings: Character Death; Subtle references to human on pony action, some explicit mentions, but no scenes; Human in equestria;
Truly interesting beginning. Can't wait for the next part ^^
Dude, that's one of a quick girl! xD
Deuteronomy, 5-6, 21. May God have pity for his soul
5450133 one could argue that because they are sentient that technically they are not animals
Also for the time period it was not unheard of for a servant girl to be assigned to a visiting dignitary to help his take care of any unwanted urges
May zaros have mercy on his soul.
Is Masao a Jew or a Christian?
5504015 Technically Christians are supposed to follow the ten commandments as well, "Keep my father's commandments"
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Yeah, I know for being one xD
Just to know what he was. Christian so.
I dont really like religion in stories but this one seems alright.
5509596 I am glad it isn't overbearing, I was trying to hint at his religion without making it obscene
5510002 i see well i usely just try and ignore the religon part and all that stuff but as i said this story is alright so please keep updating it.
Interesting...
Keep it up!
eh..thats an okay cliffhanger..not really anything thats gets me wanting more..it just feels like you accidentally pressed the publish button on an unfinished chapter.
5570554 Not my best, but hey tomorrow you get a new chapter so it isn't all bad, right?
Though to be honest, now that I read it it does look like I didn't finish the chapter. Sorry about that
Wow, so fare so good. Can't wait to binge-read the rest.
THAT'S RIGHT!!! WE JUST GOT RELIGIOUS UP IN HERE!!!!!
5574169 I hope you are enjoying the story
again! you do it again. i demand you quit hitting the publish button before the chapter is finished. hell, add a few more sentences and you could have a half decent cliffhanger. for a really good cliffhanger you need it to be suspnseful.
hell add a tad more info and the have the stallion fire at our human. and end it there.
its not perfect for an end but it doesnt feel like you made an accidental click. also a changling could get an arrow to the face as well!
sorry for giving you flak but i am really enjoying this and therefore investing my feels into it.
5574292 Hey I don't see it as flak, you are attempting to help me better the story, and for that I thank you!
I am going to go back and do a little editing to fix them, but I already have twelve chapters on the site, even if you only see six of them at the moment
Should just killed ze stallion and be Done with it perhaps pay the blame on the changelings.
5578888 Maybe he will, maybe he won't, you'll find out on the 8th
5581050 very well
I can only guess how your spell-check is fried for having to speak in the old tongue with thou and art as well as many others keep up the good work.
5586465 oh trust me, it isn't happy with me at all XD Especially with all the MLP words as well XD
5595020 no kidding
He should have killed that bowstallion....bowman?
Anyways it seems that being a lunar knight is a good thing...me my self would rather be a teutonic knight but that has nothing to do with the story and i'm rambeling again!
5604562 lol what?
mmm..look at this chapter. its all nice and shiny. i am proud of it.
5605115 I should thank you shouldn't I XD since you are beta-reading it
5604762 yeah wut?
5605750 what is a techna-whatever knight?
5610447 Teutonic knights are the german version of templar and crusaders did they not learn about them in school?
5610694 Nope *sweatdrop*
5611423 oh well thats alright i suppose not all schools have the best history classes.....i dont mean to offend.
5611826 Just remember history is written by the victors , and to find the truth you need to dig deeper than a normal history book will allow
5610694 ahhh thanks for the info also I was home schooled due to trying to kill another student for hitting me with a paper ball.
5612403 o.O say wha?
5612403 well atleast you had a good reason.
5612419 magic pigs flying trough the air!!!
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I both agree and disagree. I wasn't exactly in my right mind at the time, though I suppose I did not have to include the last bit of info
5614753 i see well i wont judge it's hardly my place to do so.
5615375 I thank you for your under standing
updating before his set deadline?! My word! Moonlit Novel,my friend, have you gone crazy? are the pigs sprouting wings finally? im joking, its fine, i think everyone love a chapter early
lovely chapter as always.
5628315 I posted at 12:30 AM EST XD
when will the lunar rebellion happen?
5655217 Soon, very soon. I promise.
5655330 you deserve more followers. followed.
5655349 thanks! Well I have got to go, it's 2:40 am here
So just wondering what dose his armor look like?
P.S nice way to pay respect to the swordpony but i dont think the Christian god like killing
Odin and Thor might.
5657938 Some of the bloodiest wars fought were fought in the name of Christ, Also I don't know how to describe his armor, basically it's full plate armor...
5657986 indeed by greedy men not that god Told them to fight.
Also i think he should have chain mail you know like the crusaders used to Wear