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RazgrizS57


With enough momentum, pigs fly just fine.

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The Crystal Empire had returned after an eternity in limbo and with it, its dark king escaped his tomb of ice. Equestria sent its most capable ponies to defend and secure the Crystal Empire, they fought admirably, but they ultimately failed to safekeep the heart of the empire. The Dyads fell, King Sombra retained his throne, and darkness blemishes the northern skies once again.

Equestria is now in the midst of recuperating, preparing itself for a large-scale siege to take back the empire and free it from King Sombra’s influence. However, the dark king will not rest until Equestria is no longer a threat. He is not above doing whatever it takes to prevent Harmony from spreading into the Crystal Empire, and he has the perfect tool to carry out his whim.


A spiritual crossover with Star Wars, based on the cover image by NCMares. Written for Equestria Daily’s Friend-Off Revival. And for Halloween, I guess.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 9 )

Raz, you monster. You made this multiple chapters. Now I feel obligated to comment on every chapter, even though I've already read this.

Raz, why :applecry:

5211750
Because I love you and you love Sunset Shimmer. By the transitive property, I love Sunset Shimmer too. Math.

5211757
That's great and all, but how is that relevant to you being a monster?

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It doesn't. I guess I'm just a monster and I'm going to have to live with that. I imagine it'll be fairly easy.

5211773
So long as we've established that.

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Also

Because I love you

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Wow. This was really neat. Totally didn't see the ending coming at all, but this still managed to be really sweet and heartwarming.

Great job.

I like this story. The way you wrote and how you put descriptions translate into imagination is how far you have lured my interests to read this story. I wished there were more chapters than what's left of right now.

Even though this practically falls into the "it was just a dream" cliché, I still enjoyed the thought experiment of what if Cadence was evil.

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