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DRWolf


Being a Wolf Psychologist surrounded by Pony kind can be quite the learning experience...

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Now with a Dramatic Reading: A Moment With the CMC

Dr. Wolf sat quietly in his chair, simply enjoying the silence between meetings. The only noise breaking the serenity was the ticking of the clock.

Even one who helped others with their stress, tension, and upset needed their own downtime once in a while to keep themselves grounded. Given his workload, it was a precious thing for the busy therapist to have any downtime at all.

However, his solitude ended with a knock outside his office. As the bipedal canine rose and opened the door, he looked up out of instinct. Instead of an adult pony looking down at him, the small wolf's eyes were greeted by the wall and the top of several little ponies’ manes. He readjusted his line of sight and found himself staring into the orange eyes of a young yellow Earth Pony.

His sensitive nose told him, by the smell of their perspiration, that the three had been doing some strenuous activity. Strangely, they also smelled of tree sap, among other things.

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This story had been inspired by the fan art piece created by Starbat many months ago. When EquestriaDaily posted their "Friend Off Revival" contest, I felt driven to write up a video script with Starbat, and it got turned into a completed story here on FimFiction with a little help from Godzillawolf. For my first attempt at a My Little Pony story, I think it turned out rather nicely.

Nice to see that EquestriaDaily included this story for their contest: Friend Off Art and Story Compilation

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Comments ( 72 )

This was very fun to be involved with.

I'm glad I was of assistance Doctor.

Comment posted by Joshiplier deleted Oct 28th, 2014

Hmmmm... Nice first story it's definitely better than other writers' first stories that I've seen. Keep up the good work doc, take your time.

For my first attempt at a My Little Pony story, I think it turned out rather nicely. But what do you think?

I think I'll look forward to more stories from you. This was rather enjoyable. :twilightsmile:

Thanks for writing! :scootangel:

This is an interesting story. It is a cossover of YouTube and FIMFiction. ¡This is what happens when worlds collide! ¡I love it!

5195934
Well this story is more than that, seeing how the author is the actual Youtuber himself.

Defiantly we'll paced and excicuted, and the CMC were adrable. I don't really have to much bad to say after a first read, although, for this line:

*“Yes?,” Dr Wolf greeted.

Get rid of the comma
Other than that, if this thing faint get 200 likes by the end of the week, I am defiantly giving it an underapreceation review, maybe even a dramatic read if I can get the CMc's voice

5196320 I voices Scootaloo and Apple Bloom. I have auditions for older versions of them on my channel but I can do them younger too just that I had to do older for an audition. The only difference is that when I did them I made them well a bit older sounding.

But I'm sure you get the idea, and I'd love to do it! :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9tClX6rVIzw&list=UUDT_55073k8u2C6-5nN-yqw

What a wonderful story Dr.Wolf. Loved it so much. Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to see if you do more stories with the Dr.Wolf character. Maybe a story where your brother Terik comes into your office?

5196576 got to use the link. It's either on the fat right or left and looks like a pair of chain links

:pinkiegasp: Whoa, what? You actually wrote a story?!
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I'm going to read it.

I heard from Kendell2 aka Godzillawolf's Blog on DA about this and really loved it :twilightsmile:. Maybe we can see more Moments with Dr. Wolf :pinkiehappy:?

Okay, I got to admit. I was surprised that in the past, you keep saying that you don't see yourself as a writer. Then all of the sudden, right out of the blue, when I was just checking on the notification, a post from you reading, DrWolf Posted a New Story. Then I checked it out.
:duck:I've got to say one thing.
That was Awesome!!! How long you've been working on that? Of course, you got some help but what made you write this?
:coolphoto: That's all I'm going to say.

Very intriguing, Dr.Wolf. :raritywink:

5198509 I was inspired to write a story based off of this fan art for the "Friend Off Revival" contest happening on EquestriaDaily.

5198988
I wish you luck then, Doc.
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Still recovering from a shock, though.

That was a pleasure to read, Dr. Wolf. :twilightsmile:

When I first watched one of your "Future Episode ideas" videos I just sat there and wondered why you were outlining your fanfic ideas and turning them into videos. Glad to see you try writing! It's a different side of the fandom with its own set of quirks and challenges. You did a very good job for your first crack at it.

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Good job for a first fic! :D I particularly like the CMCs' characterization.

5231345 Thank you kindly.

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5231352
Now write one explaining what the heck your OC is doing in Equestria. :B

Wonderful story, thoroughly entertaining descriptions of the mayhem caused by the fillies, as well Dr. Wolf's ability to keep calm and focused. I enjoyed the posting on the Dr.Wolf youtube page as well. Thanks for sharing!

Two things:

I've read in places that describe how to write for MLP that capitalizing words like Pegasus and Unicorn is expected, others say it's only if the characters name is pegasus or unicorn. I used to capitalize it soley because my spell check picked up on pegasus as needing to be capitalized (afterall, it was the name of Perseus's horse)... I'm leaning more towards not doing it lately, just saying pegasus, earth pony, and unicorn, and that does make more sense as it isn't a proper noun in that sense.

Secondly:

"Even one who helped others with their stress, tension, and upset needed their own downtime once in a while to keep themselves grounded."

It's grammatically incorrect, because it starts off with the singular subject, yet the feel of the sentence is very good, which is why I hesitated to mention it at first. One does not want his writing to come off as stilted, which could be the result if you tried for a quick fix. If you don't write fiction often, you're showing promise as being a good writer and that's a pretty bad habit for anyone just starting to get into. So, more grammatically correct:

"For even those who help others with the stress, tension, and upset, need their own downtime once in a while to keep themselves grounded."

Problem is, that sounds impersonal, so perhaps slightly rewriting it:

"Even one who helps others with their stress, tension, and upset occasionally needs his own downtime every once in a while to keep himself grounded."

Just a thought :twilightsmile:

Liked/fav'd

Off to a good start, Dr. Wolf!

Peace out :eeyup:

You spot on the characters of the CMC and their interactions with your OC, not to mention you both kept true to yourselves as well as the CMC. Overall it's pretty good.

This was nice! I liked it a lot and I enjoyed watching the video as well. If you ever need someone to help you edit your stories, please feel free to msg me. I am a ruthless grammar nazi lol :-)

5231473 DRWolf's origin story is being written as we speak. :)

*grins and applauds softly* Very sweet. I'm looking forward to seeing more writings and your adventures.

Very good fanfic doctor!

A fantastic little story Doctor.

5234299
Really?!:raritystarry:
Can't wait.:moustache::twilightsmile:

Okay, just finished reading this, and it was so spot on! It was like one of your videos....instant-fav!:twilightsmile:

Btw, I had planned on giving your OC a cameo appearance in my current fic Heroes of Harmony, as a sort of homage to you. But if you are interested in learning more about it (and any input you would like to add), just let me know.:raritywink:

5327879 I suppose it would be interesting to see DRWolf being included in more stories here.

5335782
Totally!:pinkiehappy:
And since this particular story takes place in a world inhabited by various anthropomorphic animals (including wolves), the appearance of your OC won't seem so out of place (compared to Equestria).:raritywink:
And like I said before, if you would like to be involved (at least the part concerning your OC's cameo), we can talk about it via PM.

But anyways, I might try giving cameos to other members of the BAC from YT in my stories (so far, I've only got ideas for you, Silver Quill, and possibly Digibro [even if he no longer does MLP reviews anymore]).

5335878 *Instantly thinks of the Chakat Universe*

5681822
Never heard of that. :trixieshiftright:

5681941
Hmm...maybe.:duck:

Nope, never did. Sorry.:applejackconfused:

What-what? :rainbowhuh:

5682050 We use different colors to help differentiate between us.

I assume that you're "Never did" was that you never heard of it before?

Be warned... the stories do not pull any punches when it comes to NSFW material.

5682067
Hmm..I see.

Yes. Despite having an interest in Anthropomorphic animals (though at the same time- like Dr. Wolf- don't really consider myself a Furry), I've never taken part in groups involved with it. Especially this one.

....Bring it on.

5682382
*reads introduction to Chakats article*
Wow.:rainbowderp:

5682824 I actually found the site through one of the most feel infused stories on that site... Which also "happened" to be one of the most NSFW stories on that site (I can neither confirm nor deny that the NSFW parts being the main reason why I found it in the first place...)

I recommend reading the Tales of the Folly, not written by Goldfur, but still a great and on-going series

And here's the main Chakat hirself! https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Goldfur

5682863
Yeah, which would that be?

Okay. Another time perhaps.

5682921 "Life's Dream"

I like that one...

Of course you like it StarRunner! It's what allowed you to come into existence!

*Turns to Honeytongue* Color change means that someone else it talking, not necessarily a different topic/conversation... We only just realized that that's what you thought the double spaced lines meant... Sorry for any confusion.

Tales of the Folly also goes by Folly - The Curse.

5682935
Okay then.:twilightsmile:

Lol, yeah I already figured that much.

5682967 *Clicks FIM:fiction's home page*
*Sees new message*
*7 seconds ago*
:rainbowderp:

The timing...

(Oh, and sorry Dr. Wolf that this is cluttering up the comments and has nothing to do with the story, until this post! I liked the story. Please don't delete these comments, it makes the comment section really ugly and makes people wonder what happened)

5682972
Perhaps we should continue this through a PM thread, instead of the good doctor's comment box.:twilightsheepish:

"Despite being the actual canine in the room, Dr. Wolf found himself on the receiving end of better puppy dog eyes than he believed he could manage."
´kay my head almost exploted by trying to imagine so much cuteness together.meh, good story, doc

5702071 Glad you enjoyed it.

Hehe, poor Doc had no idea what he was getting into with the CMC. Then again, most ponies only realize once it's hilariously too late.

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