A story of Luna's descent into madness, her becoming Nightmare Moon and her confrontation with Celestia.
A special thanks to ponyphonic for giving me permission to use a few of his lyrics from one of his songs, The Moon Rises, seriously, check that out, it was the inspiration for this story for me. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kPjVCIX5Fvs
Yes, I am aware how clichéd this is, but I wanted to write it.
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This is beautiful. You really captured the voice of Celestia and Nightmare.
Buck cliche, I always love these stories. This one does not disappoint.
The Moon Rises inspiring this fic is reason enough to get my fav. I've been listening to The Moon Rises a ton, especially whenever I write anything to do with Luna. *Puts The Moon Rises on loop*
that was a fantastic story good sir (?)
Thank you all!
Seeing people's comments on my work is my second favourite thing after actually writing it.
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Sir indeed :)
I loved this. :3 Very well written, as always. I can't wait to see more from you, maybe even a little TwiLuna?
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Thanks! If I come up with a good idea for TwiLuna I shall write it! It's just hard to find original ideas it's been done so much
i know im writing this WAY after the fact, but you have a glaring problem here. Celestia and Luna already knew what the elements of harmony were; they used them to defeat Discord. so why would celestia find them lying at the bottom of some random pool?
.... aaah, dont you just love the smell of plotholes in the morning?
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Yeah I noticed a while back.
I wrote it three hours, I suppose I can be forgiven.
In least there is sort of happy ending thousand years later.
Very nice
Nicely done