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Blue Valentine


WE AREN'T CRAZY... MAYBE.

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Twilight Sparkle and company had been zapped into Spike's comic book because of Spike's own fault. But at exactly the same time, Humdrum was doing it with a comic book of the Mane 6. So, while the Mane 6 and Spike were the new Power Ponies, and were trying to learn how to tame their powers, the real Power Ponies, trapped in Equestria, tried to learn how to be normal ponies for the day, and not mess up the reputation of the Mane 6. But while they're at it, the real Power Ponies actually defeat a group of villains which had come back to take revenge on the Mane 6, and actually end up saving Ponyville.

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When it is in someones Point of View it is the first person. This is third not first.

5213584 Sorry! I kinda meant like that what happened are the details according to Spike, like if it were Twilight's, it would probably say that Spike was bothering her about reading the comic, but thanks for the advice! Sorry if that was to your discontent!

Radiance's eyes are green, not blue.

5329498 Radiance is just Rarity but as a Power Pony, I think they're blue?

5329498 Yeah, I gotta agree on this. I mean, I did write this story so I had to do a little research on it, and HUZZAH, Radience has BLUE EYES.
James

Have you read the Power Ponies comic?

Can't wait to see what comes out of this. Yay hope you continue :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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