Silver Screen and Long Haul are two friends that find themselves in the bustling town of Trottingham with no home, money or plan. They will have to face their silly surroundings, personal faults, one really angry mare, and even censorship committee called C.L.O.P. but just what does all this have to do with the founding of Equestria's first traveling movie theater? Join them on the road as they uncover more about themselves, the world they live in, and a conspiracy that may just hold the fate of Equestria in it's balance.
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Also cover art! The beautiful cover picture was made by Jacob Martin AKA DocWario on Deviantart.
First!
What? I said I'd comment, I said nothing about what that comment would be.
Ok, overall it took me a while to get into the story. Usually I stay away from HiE fics but as it went on the story grew on me. I think you could do with a touch more variety in how you describe the ponies in question, relying on their names a bit too much...but since, with a few exceptions, this is almost all oc ponies it may have been necessary.
I did enjoy the turning of this story archetype into a pony one...and found the acronym hilarious. Also, I did appreciate the fact you gave the villain her comeuppance at the end.
Overall, a decent story and I look forward to reading more of it.
So the CLOP act? That's.... Interesting. I can dig it.
So she's worried about their work being morally corrupt and she runs around screaming that acronym?
Truly a genius!
Umm at the part where Lemon Drop was out of snacks you called her Lemon Tree.
Was that intentional, a mistake or am I loosing my mind and seeing things?
3666013 Nope! You caught an error, and I thank you for pointing that out.
Pretty good start!
Silver got his cutie mark!
/) I wonder what Long's is going to be...?
Onward!
A cart, huh?
How does that stand for a special talent of "heavy lifting in the service of lifesaving" or whatever? 
Heh... Equestrian irony strikes with a vengeance...! I told those guys not to provoke it, but did they listen? Noooo....!
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Uh-huh.
Where have I seen this before. Calling it now--Lemon Tree's been replaced by a changeling, and her husband is "indisposed" because he's in one of their feeding cocoons...!
Seriously, though: great story thus far.
Onward!
Changelings?
Ooh, boy...! This is not good. (for your protagonists, I mean) Whassamatter? Queen Chryssy upset by the potential of some competition in the illusion business? 
So, I wonder: is Lemon Drop half-changeling for real, or is this "mom" of hers doing that just to screw around with her head? Hmmm...
4082315 She is not half changeling, but the one who impersonated her mother is a little beyond psychopathic.
4217622 By all means go ahead, if you ever want to borrow the theater per say as well. (ALA characters going to a performance of theirs) feel free to as well.
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Thanks! /)
Lol the clop act XD
.......... first?
I feel this story needs more attention than it has right now