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Hopeful_Ink_Hoof


[He/Him] Just a writer who likes MLP and hopes to make a living off it: https://ko-fi.com/ink_hoof

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I love it!
All I can say is...

Very nice!

Gotta say love that this was Spikedash and not Twidash. Not that Twidash is bad or anything (I like twidash honestly) it's just that it feels like anything involving Twilight or Dash that also involves a relationship in some way uses twidash rather than say raridash or pinkie dash or fluttertwi or twijack etc.

Sequel, please.:rainbowwild::moustache:

This was great. The ship and fetishes were all right up my alley, and there were a lot of delicious details that made the clop very enjoyable. Thanks for writing this.

Rainbow Dash then pulled Spike down against her stomach, hugging him gently and rubbing his back gently.

We have thesauruses for a reason.

Welllllllll

5199933
The amusing part about your comment: the artist who made the image that inspired this story had considered having the picture be with Twilight, but had decided to use Dash instead.

5200357
No promises, but there is always a possibility.

5200405
Yes. I can sometimes get repetitive when I'm "'in the zone,' as it were.":duck:

5201452 I love when things just line up like that :rainbowlaugh:

Vexy #8 · Oct 29th, 2014 · · 1 ·

Ooh, SpikeDash!

Not in to the whole, 'hoof licking thing', but my boner would GREATLY disagree. And I'm ok with that!:pinkiehappy: Spike, Rainbow Dash and you pull it off really well.

A few grammar errors here and there, but a good, cute, hot and kinky story all and all!

Give it 8:moustache:/10. Good Job!

Great story but if I got asked that question by my gf I would probably... *dies from headshot by gf*:moustache:

Oh, now THIS is definitely something I need to read.

Edit: Aaaaand that's a thumbs-up from me. I don't really get Rainbow/Spike, never seen a ton of connection between them, but this was a good one. Loved the detail in the hoofplay, and the whole thing in general really. Good job!

Nice, was wondering if anyone would do something like this for Rainbow and her hooves. You have my like, and I confess myself much pleased!!

5202509

Granted, it's very unclear whether it's aged up or not.

Hey! I know Frist! He's a friend IRL, awesome dude.

will read post-work.

5199919 It's from Hellsing Abridged! The video, it's from... Hellsing Abridged. That's what it's from.

Each time Rainbow Dash down and forward toward Spike's,

They did what now?


Nice story. I'm not one for foot worship or whatever this fetish is called, but you did well on this.

5202707
Eeyup! :eeyup:

Love dat Abridged series... :twilightsmile:

5202893 I was trying to make a reference to that reference, in which the reference I was making was someone pointing out a reference. Referenception!!!!!

I love it; not too much SpikeDash out there, unfortunately. I think they're perfect for each other.

>The rest of her thought was cut off as Spike ran his tongue along the edge of Rainbow's frog
[youtube=5u4tQlVRKD8]

>She had just taken Spike's virginity
How does she know that? :moustache:

>Not burning hot or such, but enough that she could feel it, and warmer than a stallion
How aboot "stallion's" instead of "stallion"? :moustache:

>If there's anyway I can return the favor
*any way

foot fetish... not one on my list of likes but... still a decent story

Haha, nice. I've never understood the foot thing, but hey, a lot of people don't understand my thing. Nice job making it super arousing even to non podophiles. Oh and, since this looks like actual effort was applied, here's some things you should clean up. :twilightblush:

He could feel his own his heart thudding in his chest
Rainbow pulled the hoof the leg Spike was holding up
She could the entire thing inside her,
He has masturbated before, but this was the first time he had been with another.

>but there was also a strong smell of rain.
Please tell me you also believe rain has an odor.

5203025
Waaam.

Grammatical errors aside, this was a very nice read and a very hot fic.

Most excellent.

hoof worship, licking, and inter-species sex

hoof worship

Me likey! :rainbowkiss:

Im just a pleased to be here

All I can say is well done. I saw the same picture myself and was going to write something for it, only you beat me to it.

Sequel.

5205466 grammar is hard, really hard, trust me. (though probably not as hard as spke was ):pinkiehappy:

Having a cock inside her felt so good to Rainbow Dash at the moment. True, it was not as long or as thick as a stallion's, but it was enough. She could the entire thing inside her, warm and hard as she instinctively squeezed down on it.

could fit the

As the blinding pleasure of the orgasm subsided, multiple thoughts went through Rainbow Dash's mind. It had been a while since she had last had sex. At the moment, it felt like it had been forever since she had enjoyed such a powerful orgasm from another.

I think this is should be last had sex or had sex.

5203595 yea they have both been the element of loyalty after all :rainbowlaugh:

I didn't notice if first, but does Rainbow really have tits in that pic? Srsly, what the actual fuck? :rainbowhuh:

Is it sad that I want more?

No, probably not. Woo! that was awsome, dood! This is now one of my favorite ships, next to Sparity, ScootaBelle, and Spilight.

5208967 No. those aren't tits they are the what you could call 'upper arm' of her front legs. Horses (or in this case ponies) only have teats for about 2 years. they grow during pregnancy, are full sized afterwards for about a year and then slowly shrink down again. And even then they are near the middle of the body, and don't even provide pleasure to the nervous system.

I am sure you don't need me to tell you this but this was great. Excellent work interesting from start to finish.

OT fuckin P

fucking awesome dude:rainbowlaugh:

How is this Spike Harem's?

I could see this as a compilation of one-off stories with Spike trying a different fetish with a different mare, each of which is a secret fetish of the mare in question.
Rainbow Dash has a hoof fetish.
Pinkie Pie has a food fetish.
Fluttershy has a pet play fetish.
Zecora has a SM fetish. (As in holding power over a dragon.)
Twilight and Rarity (at the same time) have a bondage fetish.
Mayor mare has a SM fetish. (This time Spike holds the power.) (This one I'm looking forward to, seeing Spike being aggressive towards a mare, using his teeth and claws [not hurting her, natrually]) {now that I think about it, Trixie is also a good candidate for this one.}

Great story, but I noticed one little thing.

She could feel his seed pumping inside him with each twitch of his length.

Shouldn't that be "her"?

Funny, Spike has probably the least interaction with Rainbow Dash out of the mane six, yet I think RD/Spike may be my favorite parring. But anyway, great story.

This was really interesting. I liked the small oneshot Hopeful_Inkhoof. It is interesting, that Rainbow Dash liked what was going on. As always a brilliant writing style.

The hoof licking did nothing for me, but the sex was great.

Dude thatz just awsomness

+ original (to me at least, maybe it's been done before)
(+) didn't make me question the characters too much, albeit a little
+ feels at home in the mlp universe. doesn't treat it as a terrible mistake. doesn't exaggerate either.
- the setup felt awkward (can't pin down why though, just didn't sell it to me)
- writing didn't feel smooth at parts

As a story, mild positive, and as a clop fic, about that too. I'd tell my past self to read it.

Rainbow Dash grinned, letting out a little chuckle.

"That's true," she grinned,

( wouldn't use grin twice here. )

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