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I love it!
All I can say is...
Very nice!
Gotta say love that this was Spikedash and not Twidash. Not that Twidash is bad or anything (I like twidash honestly) it's just that it feels like anything involving Twilight or Dash that also involves a relationship in some way uses twidash rather than say raridash or pinkie dash or fluttertwi or twijack etc.
Sequel, please.
This was great. The ship and fetishes were all right up my alley, and there were a lot of delicious details that made the clop very enjoyable. Thanks for writing this.
We have thesauruses for a reason.
Welllllllll
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The amusing part about your comment: the artist who made the image that inspired this story had considered having the picture be with Twilight, but had decided to use Dash instead.
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No promises, but there is always a possibility.
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Yes. I can sometimes get repetitive when I'm "'in the zone,' as it were."
5201452 I love when things just line up like that
Ooh, SpikeDash!
Not in to the whole, 'hoof licking thing', but my boner would GREATLY disagree. And I'm ok with that! Spike, Rainbow Dash and you pull it off really well.
A few grammar errors here and there, but a good, cute, hot and kinky story all and all!
Give it 8/10. Good Job!
Great story but if I got asked that question by my gf I would probably... *dies from headshot by gf*
Oh, now THIS is definitely something I need to read.
Edit: Aaaaand that's a thumbs-up from me. I don't really get Rainbow/Spike, never seen a ton of connection between them, but this was a good one. Loved the detail in the hoofplay, and the whole thing in general really. Good job!
Nice, was wondering if anyone would do something like this for Rainbow and her hooves. You have my like, and I confess myself much pleased!!
Today in the feature box, Rainbow Dash fucks a baby.
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Granted, it's very unclear whether it's aged up or not.
Hey! I know Frist! He's a friend IRL, awesome dude.
will read post-work.
DAMN THAT WAS HOT
5199919 It's from Hellsing Abridged! The video, it's from... Hellsing Abridged. That's what it's from.
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They did what now?
Nice story. I'm not one for foot worship or whatever this fetish is called, but you did well on this.
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Eeyup!
Love dat Abridged series...
5202893 I was trying to make a reference to that reference, in which the reference I was making was someone pointing out a reference. Referenception!!!!!
I love it; not too much SpikeDash out there, unfortunately. I think they're perfect for each other.
>The rest of her thought was cut off as Spike ran his tongue along the edge of Rainbow's frog
[youtube=5u4tQlVRKD8]
>She had just taken Spike's virginity
How does she know that?
>Not burning hot or such, but enough that she could feel it, and warmer than a stallion
How aboot "stallion's" instead of "stallion"?
>If there's anyway I can return the favor
*any way
foot fetish... not one on my list of likes but... still a decent story
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Haha, nice. I've never understood the foot thing, but hey, a lot of people don't understand my thing. Nice job making it super arousing even to non podophiles. Oh and, since this looks like actual effort was applied, here's some things you should clean up.
>but there was also a strong smell of rain.
Please tell me you also believe rain has an odor.
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Waaam.
Grammatical errors aside, this was a very nice read and a very hot fic.
Most excellent.
Me likey!
Im just a pleased to be here
All I can say is well done. I saw the same picture myself and was going to write something for it, only you beat me to it.
Sequel.
5205466 grammar is hard, really hard, trust me. (though probably not as hard as spke was )
could fit the
I think this is should be last had sex or had sex.
5203595 yea they have both been the element of loyalty after all
I didn't notice if first, but does Rainbow really have tits in that pic? Srsly, what the actual fuck?
Is it sad that I want more?
No, probably not. Woo! that was awsome, dood! This is now one of my favorite ships, next to Sparity, ScootaBelle, and Spilight.
5208967 No. those aren't tits they are the what you could call 'upper arm' of her front legs. Horses (or in this case ponies) only have teats for about 2 years. they grow during pregnancy, are full sized afterwards for about a year and then slowly shrink down again. And even then they are near the middle of the body, and don't even provide pleasure to the nervous system.
I am sure you don't need me to tell you this but this was great. Excellent work interesting from start to finish.
OT fuckin P
fucking awesome dude
How is this Spike Harem's?
I could see this as a compilation of one-off stories with Spike trying a different fetish with a different mare, each of which is a secret fetish of the mare in question.
Rainbow Dash has a hoof fetish.
Pinkie Pie has a food fetish.
Fluttershy has a pet play fetish.
Zecora has a SM fetish. (As in holding power over a dragon.)
Twilight and Rarity (at the same time) have a bondage fetish.
Mayor mare has a SM fetish. (This time Spike holds the power.) (This one I'm looking forward to, seeing Spike being aggressive towards a mare, using his teeth and claws [not hurting her, natrually]) {now that I think about it, Trixie is also a good candidate for this one.}
Have fun.
Great story, but I noticed one little thing.
Shouldn't that be "her"?
Funny, Spike has probably the least interaction with Rainbow Dash out of the mane six, yet I think RD/Spike may be my favorite parring. But anyway, great story.
This was really interesting. I liked the small oneshot Hopeful_Inkhoof. It is interesting, that Rainbow Dash liked what was going on. As always a brilliant writing style.
The hoof licking did nothing for me, but the sex was great.
Dude thatz just awsomness
+ original (to me at least, maybe it's been done before)
(+) didn't make me question the characters too much, albeit a little
+ feels at home in the mlp universe. doesn't treat it as a terrible mistake. doesn't exaggerate either.
- the setup felt awkward (can't pin down why though, just didn't sell it to me)
- writing didn't feel smooth at parts
As a story, mild positive, and as a clop fic, about that too. I'd tell my past self to read it.
( wouldn't use grin twice here. )