• Member Since 26th Oct, 2014
  • offline last seen Aug 25th, 2016

Phony Pony Storyteller


The phony pony just wants to tell stories, but it just can't seem to get it right, can it?

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A tale of Changelings, Princesses, Mirrors, and Destinies. Follow the story of a group of ponies and changelings as they struggle to find their place in the world. See the story from a different point of view, and you might just find answers to questions you never asked. A young changeling trains to take the throne, but eventually, she will leave the hive. When she does, she will set out in search of a new destiny, but she won't be alone. One day, she will return to free her changelings from Chrysalis' rule, but before she does, she must decide who she herself is, just as everypony else must.

Warnings:
Rated [Gore] for one or two fairly gory moments.
Rated [Sex] for references to sexuality, genders, and sex.
While the story does not revolve around the points, please be warned that they are present.

P.S. Is you think you know a good title or description that's better than what I have, let me know. The title and description are basically placeholders, so feel free to suggest something.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 10 )

I'm interested in seeing where you take this - have a like and a watch. And don't worry too much if it seems awful - no story comes out perfect from the very beginning. You can always improve it later when you have a better idea of where it's going and how it gets there. Most authors go through one or more rounds of editing and rewriting to get a story to its (more or less) "final" form.

On the plus side, this reads better than a good portion of the other stories posted on any given day, and I don't remember spotting any spelling or grammar errors (they generally stand out like a sore thumb to me), so you're already doing much better than the average. So don't get discouraged! The only way to not improve is to not try. :)

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Thank you. I'm glad you like it so far. Sorry I didn't reply earlier, but life kinda got in the way. Same reason Chapter 3 isn't out yet: I managed to concuss myself, so I haven't been able to focus recently. Other stuff too, but that was the main reason... Sorry for the life story there...
Also, thank you for noticing how few spelling and grammar errors are present. I pride myself in paying to that kind of stuff. If my story doesn't stand out for the plot, it is going to stand out for the quality... or penmanship... or something like that.
Thank you again, and I hope to get chapter 3 out soon. You don't know how happy it makes me to reply to someone on my story. Thank you for the encouragement. Did this come off as needy? Oh no...:facehoof:

5604843 Ouch! Glad you're okay. (You're okay, right...?) You aren't alone, in any case, so don't let it get to you. Life happens. I've been stuck with nothing getting written on my own stories for months.

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Actually, I was lucky. It could have been a lot worse. Depending on the severity of a concussion, it can take a long time to recover from one, and even then, it can affect your life forever. Thankfully, I am recovering very rapidly, so it wasn't actually that bad, just bad enough to throw me off for a while. I'm good, now.
Also, I got a little bit of Chapter three done, so you don't have to worry about if I won't keep it up. I will.

5624665
Thanks man. Will do, and I hope you continue to enjoy.

5624952
Whoa... Sorry about that... :twilightblush:
I actually wasn't paying attention. I often use the terms 'man' and 'dude' as gender neutral, even if they really aren't. Sorry, um... ma'am? Geez, I was about to use dude there... This is actually an excellent time to ask what should I use there, just so I don't make any mistakes in the future. Do you have any suggestions?

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No its fine :derpytongue2: I just find it a bit funny how people always think I'm a guy because if my username. I'm fine with terms like dude :twilightsmile:

Ha, I didn't even think about it. I often don't think about genders, and things like that. Didn't even cross my mind. Well, I'll let you get back to your stuff. You probably have more important things to do than talk to me... Have a nice day.

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