My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic -- Off The Record

by The King of Hearts

Return

Hello everyone, today is the day I have decided to place my newest chapter (Return) in for approval.

I would have made a blog post about it, but i couldn't tag this story in it, so i wanted to make sure as many readers saw it as possible.

It should be up pretty quick, so feel free to give it a read when you get the chance!

Also, if you're following me, you'll see it as soon as it's up there! Otherwise, just check the newest stories.

Thank you everyone!

Comments

[silentname]

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[ShadowKing1992]

This means that you will continue this story?

[The King of Hearts]

3368860

For the next 25,000 words at least. I complicated things with how i wrote the story, you'll see.

[silentname]

3368860 Yes! We need to have friggin' party. No, really, let's celebrate.

[silentname]

Time to keep this tab open for a few hours.

[Sergiovan]

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[Gskar]

All i can say right now i1.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/001/987/fyeah.jpg
And happy to continue following u

[TheDeathFaze]

FUCKER YOU MADE ME EXCITED CAUSE I THOUGHT THERE WAS A NEW CHAPTER! D:

[Blazing Justice]

I was like, "He didn't." But you did. Thank you for being amazing, sir. I approve.
~DJ

[The King of Hearts]

3369118

The new chapter will be out later today.

Keep checking new stories for Return.

[Cynical Brony]

3369222soamIespeciallysinceithasasequelandthisisn'tevendone.

[The King of Hearts]

3369222
3370484

Your call. The story is pretty fudging huge.

Like me.

If you know what i mean.

[Just_A_Nopony]

oh no... there goes my social life

[Discount Irish]

Y'know, I really want to read this, but the only times I have to read are away from my main computer, and for some odd reason, I can't download the HTML to my phone :/

[The King of Hearts]

3371269

What is it? An IPhone? Or android?

I'm sure you could find a memo-like program to copy and paste it. At least, i've done that myself in the past.

[xluferx]

YAYAYAT

[The-voice-of-the-dragon]

You da bomb

[Cynical Brony]

3370629This has two meanings.

[Discount Irish]

3371285
Android.
But I don't feel like going through EVERY chapter to copy/paste it onto some kind of blank paper app or something similar.
I'm a lazy bastard >.>
Which, considering that I'm 18 and 90 lbs, is very weird ._.

[The King of Hearts]

3371977

I'm sure there would be some kind of app you could use... but, your call. Don't wanna look like I'm pushing you or anything.

[TrackingTarget]

3371269
If you're on Android, grab the Moon+ Reader app, should be on Google Play or whatever they call the marketplace these days. There's a free version that supports both the HTML documents and the .epub file (the .epub is the entire story, divided properly into separate chapters). There's a paid version too but I see no reason to get it.

[The King of Hearts]

3372304

Thats the beauty of my story. I'll just make it canon in my next chapter

[Rogue147]

i hit the like button just from the A/N at the start

[Classy Toad]

Wtf is this shit Batman?
Your still writing!
AHH!
...
I tent to show my excitement negatively, it's a real turn off in bed... :D

[Classy Toad]

3372404
Fuck you your an ass!

[Classy Toad]

3372405

...
Don't judge me...

Also congrats of the 600 up votes. You welcome you manipulative bitch.

[Discount Irish]

3372024
I know how to take advice, suggesting you're being pushy annoys me more :P

3372315
TO THE MARKETPLACE!
I should prolly update some of my current apps too...

[Discount Irish]

3372315
Turns out my phone isn't compatible... with Moon+ Reader... ;-;
I should be getting a break soon, I suppose I shall start reading then.
Plus, I'm running out of other things to read XD

[TrackingTarget]

3372611
Try Cool Reader, should be able to handle the HTML files at least.

[Discount Irish]

3372640
Yup, that's what I downloaded as a substitute.
Sad news, still wouldn't download the HTML. It said "Not enough space", which is bullshit.
Good news, after downloading a download override, I was able to download the .epub, the one that I thought I would never use.
And, I can keep An Alternate Path on my HTML reader while Cool Reader is up >:3
Now, I sleep, because it is 7:30 AM and I just realized.

[Fawkes]

i saw it on the homepage and was like FUCK YEAH and then i was like DAMMMMNNNN! 24,000 words?!

[Maverick Huntress]

*Reads desc* seems interesting.

*Sees the word count and 80 chapters, neary falls off of chair in surprise* Holy piss! This is close to Fallout: Equestria length!

[darthvader45]

King of Hearts, you are one awesome author. Btw, the Dax in me challenged me to read the entire thing in one day. I mentally said, "Challenge accepted." And, at 4:44 pm Eastern Standard Time, I did it. So yeah, read 80 chapters in one day. If anyone/anypony can beat that, try me. Yeah, I'm also issuing a challenge to Twilight Sparkle herself. She thinks she can read 80 chapters in less than a day? I say, PROVE IT. Someone tell her. NOW.

[enigma of souls]

3373803

Lol Look up Diaries of a Madman it makes Fallout: Equestria seem like a childs book in length. Be warned though it is HiE and has rated M stuff but it is the best HiE I have read.

[Magical Trevor]

... Shouldn't this be labeled complete if there's a sequel? Saw the sequel, pulled up this as a result to find where it started, and it's... Incomplete? lolwhut?

[The King of Hearts]

3374878

At this point, it's a sequel. I haven't decided whether or not the story will continue here, or in another new story. It's how I write all my offshoots, if you check my other stories.

[Dorkking]

Well the ending of the most recent "sequel/side story" left me just a tad confused, but I'm really excited for the next chapter of this story!

[Star Saber]

3374299 80 chapters in less than 10 hours.

[darthvader45]

3378207 Mine was in less than 7 hours.

[The King of Hearts]

3379349

Not a plot hole.

I address that in Fall of the Night. The entire chapter is dedicated to answering why there was an extra element.

It'll be explained in time.

[kalash93]

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[Star Saber]

3378896 Ponyfeathers....you said a day....

[The King of Hearts]

3381241

Dude. I'm 275,000~ words in. And you're asking me to rewrite EVERYTHING?

I used selflessness because it IS selfishness. They're the same thing. And it's not an element of harmony anyway. It's an element of chaos.

[freddy jason]

so new passerbyer, saw you have this and otr return. return is complete, but this is not? is it just some finishing up or is the story truly not complete. i really don't know as i am just a new reader to this, but it has intrigued me.

[The King of Hearts]

3381790

I make extra-long chapters, and post them as stand alone stories. It just helps get followers.

[freddy jason]

3381799 well i guess it worked, so to the second part though. this is incomplete? there is an epilogue. what if you don't mind the plans for future writing on this? just i like to know the nature of incomplete works before i dive into them (have unfortunately been let down too many times...). i will start a new story series, yes. but one in progress i have a hard time picking up. it is intriguing but am confused on the ending and epilogue but incomplete status is all

[darthvader45]

3382026 Yep. But more like FUS RO YAY!

[jamie9897]

3266745 I forgot about this comment... man I was sick, I couldn't even spell hope.