• Member Since 3rd Mar, 2013
  • offline last seen Jul 30th, 2019


Hello, I'm superpony55. I used to be on this site a lot, but I've sort of lost interest in MLP. My older stories are not very good quality, but I hope you enjoy anyway.

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Interesting. Good job. :pinkiesmile:

5205643 You have made me think, ponder, and question. In my book that means a success. Yes. This is a story worth telling.


Wow. Thank you. :twilightblush: That's a huge compliment.


You're quite welcome. :twilightsmile:

Excellent story, Super. I felt as though it was just the right length, managing to deliver some pretty intense feels without overstaying its welcome, or coming across as pretentious. Short, punchy, mysterious, and best of all, the first entry to the OC Life Stories contest! I'd love to learn more about this OC and the grimly relatable world in which they exist. And the ending really brought it all together, like duct tape, but it sure as heck wasn't broken. It stuck.
Good luck in the contest, by the way!
- Lemon (The Story Squeezer)

Very interesting. Vague, but interesting.

Can I have a link to the picture you used for your avatar please?


Thanks for reading! :twilightsmile:

Just sayin' that there's not a single quotation mark... Am I just being stupid and this is some weird grammar thing?


Speaking is in italics, instead of quotation marks. :twilightsmile: Thanks for reading!

5206223 :P Sorry, I'm not great with grammar, I was wondering if replacing it with italics was grammatically correct, I didn't mean to say it as in there was no way to tell who was speaking xD

A changeling with voices in her head. A surprisingly interesting concept. I hope that you decide to do more with this in the future.


Thanks! Though she's not actually a changeling. I think I will use her again.

...Now to think of a name for the character...


I very much enjoyed the conflict between the different aspects of herself.

Well done!


So far you are in the lead (seeing as how you are the only one who submitted so far... *sigh*


I'm glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile: Hopefully someone else submits before the deadline. I'd hate to be the only one!

5226864 Yeah... It would stink to have you be the only one to submit... Deadline is end of November anyway so... On the plus side, you are so close to a virtual backrub and feature in the group!

So sorry for such a late, late, really late response to this, Twilight! :fluttershysad: :twilightsheepish:

Anyways, I think this is really nice, only... I almost cannot see where this would be Celestia. :derpyderp2:

I wasn't lost while reading the story, just trying to put pieces together... The end was a fair wrap-up, though.
I a glad I finally understood at the end - although, as I said, I wasn't lost... just trying to figure things out. A few of the pieces don't seem to fit the puzzle in my head, though; - excess parts of the story; the stallion, the exploding ponies... Huh. Maybe I have to reread it.

But over all it was a good story, can't say I don't like it. :scootangel:


Oh - this isn't about Celestia, it's about an OC. In the sequel the explosions will probably be cleared up a bit. :twilightsmile: Thanks for reading!

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