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Darth Gonzo


a Brony a Transformers fan a Power Rangers fan. Spike is best pony & we all have a Destiny

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Humdrum is trapped in an asylum with not just his but all of the Power Ponies's villains and to add to his problems the Mane-iac has over the asylum's computer systems how is going to make it read and find. Story based on Batman: Arkham Asylum game. The story is part of Phantom Fan 21's Power Ponies Universe.

Also thanks Phantom Fan 21 for proofreading and thanks nightcrawlerfan for finding a cover

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Comments ( 66 )

Seems pretty good so far:twilightsmile:

Hmm, Arkham asylum, interesting. You might wanna take it a little slower though, this seemed a bit too fast and not descriptive enough. One thing that disturbs me a little is that I find Mane-iac flirting with Hundrum kinda cute. Unlike Joker's which was disturbing. I also wonder how Spike/Hundrum came to be like this, he's become like Batman but unlike him would have a few superhuman powers like invulnerability and some enhanced strength.

5182675 I'm not going to be writing the original of Humdrum Phantom's going to be writing it.

5182675 He right. I just get to get Masked Matter-Horn out of the way first.

5190813 I got an idea for a story starring Derpy.

there are other main and fan power pony villians as well as heroes

5202370 Okay but why are you telling me that?

5203766 This story is part of Phantom Fan 21's Power Ponies universe. You should check out his stories.

5203785 i did also cyborg pony is most likely going to face mane-iac first in univers

5203876 Possibly but I got a story that is in the same universe as this story I'm just waiting for it to be done submitting.

5213203 cause he's a villain. Also I just saw the bucket on Spike's foot on the cover. Very funny

5213213 I thought it was funny to.

5213213 Also the reason Gummy's villain is because I needed a lizard character.

5213301 Have you seen my Captain Goodguy story?

5213315 in fact I just favorited it.it is comong along very good. I remember you from Phantom Fan21's blog about the Shattered Dimensions crossover he's writing.

5213418 Have you seen his Power Ponies stories?

5213428 yep. Fluttershy's is my favorite and I am waiting for the update on the 2nd chapter. I'm also started my own Power Poniesverse with a new team and an ultra bad-ass villain they face. And my later fic's shall dive deeper into the truth behind Saddle Rager's power's.

5213464 I helped him with the Power Ponies stories.

5213620 well than you sir have me as a follower. And a moustache.:moustache:

5213715 That is one of the reasons I'm making stories in his Power Ponies universe.

5213786 moustaches and follows? Also I do it because I like to do it.

5213896 you didn't answer the question. For moustaches and follows?

5213915 I don't understand the question?

5213923 I mean is that the reason you write these stories? For moustaches and follows

5213973 No I'm writing them because I want to.

5213990 thanks for answering. And so do I. And have a lot of ideas and this is a way to get them out.

5214056 Would you like a hint at my next story?

5214120 It's about a mad pony with a box.

Mad Pony with box: Mane-iac or pony Discord or Doctor Who
Box: Pandora's box or the Tardis.

5214196 Doctor? Doctor Who?

5214217 don't start with that. that jokes been beaten to death several times.

5214229 Sorry I couldn't resist. Also it's going to be in the Power Ponies universe.

i figured. i may do one taking place after he events in the 2014 Annual which is a very good read

5239396 What do you mean?

5239434 you and my curiosity and now you have my adtention

5239634 What are you curious about?

5239659 how he is going to stop her

5239811 I haven't thought that far ahead.

5239917 Would you mine checking out my blog?

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