Do you know what episode the vector in the cover is from? At the very least, do you know where you got the picture?

5271678 Here you go: BLAM

He knew it must have affected her terribly, for during his long story she bit her lower lip in distain while her breathing became labored. At one point she even slid a hoof underneath the covers, most likely to rub at her aching stomach that must have been troubling her upon hearing of Shining’s incestuous tale.

Lost it here. Poor Shining, everypony enjoying his misfortune like this, and he doesn't even realize it until far too late. But at least he's getting lasagna out of the deal somehow.

... We're still going to get Night Light's story in the narrative, aren't we.

The first chapter made sense.

The second feels like a tack-on, with stupid sprinkled liberally all over it. Then again, I should have forseen that with all the tags being used.

*shrugs*

Poor Shiny, sex is never going to be the same ever again for him I guess, in Equestria, rape is fine if it's your sister and wife doing it?

5272897 Wait a minute there... you're saying the first part made sense?

TWILIGHT!!!!!

Yes?

*SMACK* What the fuck?

Owwwwwww... What do you mean and why did you smack me?

Why? Why did you fuck your BBBFF?

Ummmm... For scientific purposes?

5273253
In the context of my expectations upon reading the description, yes

I do like the idea of everypony else enjoying themselves with the situation, and Shining being completely unable to understand why they have no problems.
However, having Shining constantly begging for things to stop, during the act itself, tends to make these just a bit too rapey for me to enjoy, and that's too bad because I really love Twining.

...Continue.

5272815 I think that might be where I'll draw the line but I've been wrong before

5273119 "The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few," Gandalf the Grey from Harry Potter.

5290879 Thank you and corrected!

... Isn't it redundant to say "vegetarian" lasagna when you're an herbivore? I mean, there might be SOME species that makes meat lasagna in Equestria, but obviously the assumption would be a lack of meat.

Hold on, I had another thought in here somewhere...

Oh, right.
That was super rude of Twilight to tell Shining that his penis was the SECOND best during afterglow, even if he probably didn't even register that at the moment.
Not to mention it's largely baseless; she admitted herself that she didn't have sex often, so she must have been working with a very small sample size.

“Is your sister still looking for research subjects?”

Shining then slammed the door on him.

Hah.... Yesh.

And the second best cock in Equestria.

...Big Mac or Daddy? Or Spike, maybe? Child incest rape wouldn't be too too big of a jump from this... Would it?

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...Damn it. I really need to get laid again. Like NOW.

If I was Shining, I would have just bit the bullet and-
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I eagerly await all downvotes; they feed the troll in me.

5446111 at first I thought, because Cadence's voice came from the opposite site, he was being raped by the 'HEADLESS HORSE', and was about to yell at him "RUN YOU FOOL!", then I remembered he was shackled so I was suggesting to "KILL IT WITH FIRE!"... but then it turned out it was Twilight... well nothing wrong here I guess.

Seems Shiny, disagreed.

Still, first fiction that I read, where Shiny didn't give his consent for Twilight's rape attempt, and he didn't budge either.

So prude of private Shiny.

Oh and so dissapoint in those traitorous mares, course you Twilight! *swears with popcorn held high*

5414925 I already had this conversation with my best guy... and I lost of course or else I wouldn't be here reading this, and visit inappropriate sites that feature pictures of this kind of content.

I'm honestly not sure, whether is supposed to be funny or sad. The first chapter seemed okay, sense it was "purely for scientific reasons, but the second one just seemed like everyone was being overly cruel to Shinning. Don't get me wrong, it was still entertaining, but....

5446111
Let it go, let it go
Can’t hold it back anymore
Let it go, Let it go
On my back, in Twilight, to the core

The cum glows white on her feathery wing
Not a clean spot to be seen
An empire of impregnation, and it looks like I’m the king
My heart is pumping like this swirling sperm inside
Couldn’t keep it in
Heaven knows I tried

Don’t put it in, don’t cum inside
Don't finish up, just end the ride
Concentrate, don’t ejaculate, don’t let it blow
Well now she'll grow

It’s funny how some resistance makes everything seem hot
And the fears that once controlled me can’t get my shaft to not
Up there on the hard thick cock she finally can conceive
I know I left a wife behind but I’m too restrained to leave

Lay, balls-deep, beside the wife I’ve chosen
You won’t find my cock, in the mare beside me
Oh Twilight, oh no!

Let it go, let it go
Can’t hold it back anymore
Let it go, Let it go
On my back, inside her to the core
And here I lay
And here I’ll stay
Let it go, let it go
Incest never bothered me anyway.

- Shakespearicles

Is this still alive?

6866349 oh hell yeah!
or should i say, oh cum on!

6866349 how long until Disney and/or hasbro finds out about this? You've really put yourself between two suing giants with that.
And they apparently don't have good history, so don't expect them to play nice. It's gonna be an ugly event.

7371267 Does this look like the face of fear?

7371678 not really, but that's not what really matters.
what really matters is watching Disney and Hasbro sue each other over the right to sue you.

7372113 Flattering.

Can't be asked to keep waiting and taking a slot on my huge list of waiting. Dropped...

when's the next update

Nice Clockwork Orange reference