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JoeChacho
Life is too short to try and impress everyone so just try to impress your self.
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Wow, I just burnt through that pretty fast. Now, I can definitely see that there are some flaws in your writing style, and some improvement is needed. However, I do very much like the idea and potential of this story, I hope to see more of it soon.
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Glad to hear you like it. Is there any thing in particular that you could point out for me to improve on, I would greatly appreciate it.
Here you go, I read this guide a while ago and I can tell you it will help you, ALOT! if your really interested in making this story high quality, then I highly suggest reading this thing. even if it is super long. http://www.fimfiction.net/writing-guide
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I was writing this story just for fun but I'll give it a look see. Thanks for the info
Ponies are herbivores...
But good chapter
Nice action in this chapter. This reminds me of the Deadrising series, with the aggression going up at night.