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Celestia is feeling lonely at the Grand Gallopping Gala, and makes some poor decisions to make herself feel better. It is her party and she's going to cry if she wants to...
Rated teen for mild drinking, and mild sexual reverences.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 36 )

Well written and pleasant read.

And hour of sitting at a table alone, watching all the other mingle and dance.

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A few mistakes, but only a couple.

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If you liked it, stay tuned because I'm pumping these out fast. 2 Stories in 2 days.:rainbowwild:
Will have anther by the weekend
And love your avatar

5176351
YES! someone knew why I did that!:derpytongue2:

5176386
for the record, I just found this story not two minutes ago and that is totally where my mind went XD

Now to actually read it :P

PS-glad to see some people have a decent taste in music XD

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Its nothing like the song, just a little joke.

Was reading the description *spittake*; Grand Glopping Gala. .............................. Wut.

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I know, and darn :P
I was hoping for some crazy.

Anyway I finally got around to reading the story, and it was pretty good *thumbs up*

though I did feel sorry for Celestia. And a bit for Silver Hoof as well, vomiting after a kiss, even if it wasn't really his fault, and then running away won't exactly leave the best impression on him. It'd be nice if she was able to explain about the stomachache then, or at least the day after. Poor dear.

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Did I spell it wrong? :twilightoops: I'll check the show latter.

5176824
There will be a sequel. Don't worry.
(though its really going to be a clop fic when she goes to her room and is reminded of her need from the kiss, and realizes she needs more than her hoof to calm it)

5176845
its galloping, not glopping. As for if you spelled it wrong, I didn't notice.

also okay then, I may have to check that out. Not sure how much I'd like it, but if there is hope for a happy ending, I'll give it a shot :p

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It may not be clop have not decided yet. Considering how she felt at the end, I'd say that she would not be in the mood of that.
And there will be one. eventually!

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Eventually is good enough for me! :yay:

Also you write how you wanna write. I just didn't feel too much of the sexin' vibe after all this. If walking/dancing made her vomit, thrashing around in bed sounds...worse :pinkiesick:

Just me overthinking it :twilightsheepish:

But yeah, looking forward to a sequel(s)!

Alright, yep, I was bit iffy 'bout it going through it but yep, that last sentence was 'nough to tie the knot for me

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yha, probably. I'm thinking about doing both. One story as just kind of a shipping piece, the other as an alternate piece.

:twilightsmile:

Well done, it felt so real, as if I were watching it unfold before my eyes. I also like the idea that the Grand Galloping Gala is really Princess Celestia's birthday as well.

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Thank you! And I just thought, if Celestia had a birthday party, It would probably be the biggest event of the year. But, in canon, her birthday has never been mentioned, like the information has been lost in time.

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Well, in my opinion, when you are immortal such trival things like birthdays lose their importance, and all around "magic," if you will.

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Even so, what if the last time someone wished you a happy birthday was over 600 years before?

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Then I'm sure it would be a treasured memory, all I'm saying is that immortals tend to not dwell on someone not knowing their birthday for the simple fact that that would be expecting too much of people. This is why immortals are so alien to use, and we to them. For an immortal the fall of Rome might as well have been yesterday, but for use it was another age. This is also why I enjoy immortal characters so much, they can comprehend time on a level we mortals, with out limited life spans, can not even begin to fathom. It is almost God like, and yet still within our level of understanding because for all their differences, immortals and mortals are still metaphysical beings; they can laugh, cry, and feel as we do. The only radical differences is their life span, usually.

Anyway, that is my concept on immortals, but I can totally understand your thought process as well, and truthfully, I like them both. Your's is more geared towards the passing moments, while mine is set on the broader horizon; it is merely a differences in perspectives.

That was perfect! Truthfully, I thought that this chapter would just be an unnecessary addition, but I'm glad I was so wrong. Seriously, this was very nice, and a pleasure to read.

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Whew, I was afraid of it being unnecessary. But there will be 2 more, but I may not do them. *shrugs* it is good the way it is.

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I concur, but if you can make it work as good as this then don't let something as trivial as "doubt" get in the way.

Either way, keep up the good work.

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Well, with that I will. I did work really hard on the moon set and sun rise scene. I'm just stuck on what the 2 do during that day... Well, other than *SPOILER OMITTED*

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Eh, luck is hard to come by.

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Lol, I see. Well I hope it comes out as well as this one.

5202445
The beginning is. I just need to... work out the kinks for the rest of it...

Now that...that was just nice
I got nothin' for that, that was just genuinely a good way to spend time

“I almost forgot,” She raises a brow, wondering what in the wide world of Equestria it could possibly be. “Happy birthday, Celestia.”

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I thought he was a jerk :rainbowlaugh: i love that :heart:

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*Bows* You're welcome. More stories are to come from me. Stay tuned.

Just saw that this had another chapter. That's what I get for not adding it to my tracking list *shakes fist at self mentally*

I liked it though. Felt nicer than leaving him with illness on him. *thumb up*

5306232
I had actually planed to more chapters. they fell through the cracks.. its nice how it is.

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