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Spirit Guide


The chicken didn't cross the road by waiting 🐔

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After their defeat at the hands of the Rainbooms, Adagio, Aria and Sonata search for a new motive. Anything to keep them alive. Their aimless wanderings bring them to the home of two people, who themselves have learned from past mistakes.

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This was touching, I wouldn't Object to a series, but it's nice as a stand alone.

Ditto. Series would be nice, but this is good as single too.

Series! Series! Series! Series! Series! Series!
Series! Series! Series! Series! Series! Series!
Series! Series! Series! Series! Series! Series!
Series! Series! Series! Series! Series! Series!
Series! Series! Series! Series! Series! Series!
Series! Series! Series! Series! Series! Series!
GIVE US WHAT WE WANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

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Wow, you guys are scaring me :twilightsmile: None of my other fics got so intense comments before (except for two overly negative and depressing comments on Destiny Sparkle). I may attempt at more in the future, but It's hard for me now because I'm writing about 15 fics at once, half of them part of a series that I've been planning for the last five years but only started writing this year

5436289 what can we say. This is quite good. I actually didn't expect much when I started reading, but it managed to draw me in.

WOW just wow, it was touching and a good reading, I enjoy it and it would be good to see it become a series that i would like to read, but it good as single.

This story is simply AWESOME :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Please make more of it. It have so much potential.

SO.AWESOME!!!!!!:pinkiehappy: 20% cooler! Update!!!:rainbowkiss:

This was a most excellent story and I can see it as a springboard for more of them :eeyup:

I've had this on my 'to-read' list for a while. Dang I took too long. This was surprisingly touching.

Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.

5610460 Where did you get the icon for your avatar?

5989346 I found it on deviantart months ago and saved it on my PC, sadly though I can't remember the name of the pic. Why do you ask?

5989343 You really think I should? :rainbowderp:

NOW I WANT A SERIES WHERE DAGI, ARI, AND NATA LIVE WITH SOMBRA AND NIGHTY. Seriously, though, the big bads finding a new life in a new world seems real interesting...

you packed a lot into this story, nicely done. it does feel a bit compressed though, like most MLP episodes, so feel free to rewrite this one into several chapters, developthe characters in your head canon, have them struggle a bit and make those beginning steps towards being a better someone. feels a bit rushed to have the sirens go from losing to the Rainbooms to becoming different from their nature.

if course who knows what actually happens when getting blasted by rainbow magic does to someone.

At the end:

This is an amazing moving story. :pinkiesad2:
You can be proud of you.

I would want to rewrite this story on MLPfictions (an alternate website for french fanfic on MLP), so that french people can read the story. :pinkiesad2:
Can I ? :pinkiesad2:
(You will be credited, of course :raritywink: )

8075917 Oh thanks you a lot !! :pinkiehappy: :pinkiesad2:

8088638 Can I ask you something ?
On the site where I translate your fic, I have to separate your one-shot in multiples chapters.
Can I ? :pinkiesad2:

8110539 I owe you a million of thanks. You're saving my life. :yay:

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