Misnomer [mis-noh-mer] noun: 1. A misapplied or inappropriate name or designation. 2. An error in naming a person or thing.
Daring Do, the world's most famous series of adventure books, enrapturing the hearts of fans world-wide. Recently, the copies have been disappearing off of the shelves, and the last entry to the series was over three years ago. The children say that Daring Do was dead, died on one of her adventures. The real truth is that Daring Do was dead, and the fans were the ones that killed her.
There were a bit of 'can' and 'can't' that I think need rechecking, overall I found this very nice. Good piece.
5173964 Thanks, I'll go back over it to be sure
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An error you will find.
One quick thing: Daring's last name is spelled with only one "o" ("Do"), not two.
5174467 Noted and corrected
5174382 Corrected
Dude, your tense is all out of whack. You could also stand to take a thesaurus to this, some of the words don't quite fit. I could do a quick edit and PM you if you like.
5174702 I'm quite fine, no thesaurus needed. Thanks, but no thanks
5174592 Cool. Glad I could help.
5174763 You're very welcome.
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5174800 I realize it has it's flaws, but this was to help me heal. I've been watching it all day, and it's never left popular stories. In a perfect world, it may hit the feature box.
5174803 Hey, it doesn't have that many flaws, and if it's helped you, that's what's important, right?
And that's cool. May it reach the Featured box before you know it!
Now I know, that I can't make you stay...
5175323 R.I.P. in peace Neko
I don't know what else to put.
Damn
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2X6DZUpi7nI did a remake of your reading have a good day