Luna is really, really, really bored. But Celestia is being a meany, grumpy hooves and won't play with her. She's told to play by herself but that's impossible. Can a filly really play by herself? Of course not! That's what big sisters are for, right? To play with you when you're bored.
But things change when Luna discovers the ultimate power of the universe, imagination. Now she has the power to create and destroy at her very whim. And she knows just what to do with it. There will be adventure, silliness, and mushy stuff. What grand adventures await Luna in her imagination?
Chapters (2)
5168567 Thanks. It's only just the beginning, hopefully. I'm not the best at comedy so this is good to hear for me.
Ah yes, the magnificent power of imagination... When placed in the right hands, it can create worlds of unseen beauty and can solve problems that no man can provide a solution to...
Yes, I'm autistic. I have a powerful imagination of myself and I know just what fun imagination can provide to a bored person.
5169617 Well, I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Luna will definitely have fun with this.
I understand autism. Been around it for a long time, Asperger's more specifically. Not me, but a family member. And what a vivid imagination he has.
5484866 Thanks.
For anybody reading this after this post. The story has been transferred from me to Silver Reader. I just couldn't come up with anything new and the little else that I was working on was terrible. I also do not have enough time to devote to this and the my other stories. I hope you all understand.
To Silver Reader. Thank you for taking this up and I look forward to seeing what you come up with.
Oh, man. This will become weird...
5489777 Best of luck with the story.
Awwwwww, but seriously though I LOVE IT!
cute.
Great story until you realize she can fly.
Well, that was one of the tiniest chapters I've seen in recent memory, but I'm glad to see that this story was continued somehow, at least.
I like.how that turned out. A bit short but still cute. Glad I handed it over. Keep up the good work.
It's pretty short and cute, but it's a damn shame that it's just that. It's too short! I wished that we heard more of the horrible lands of Blaketa, and why these lands seem to have such horrible snakes. Is the land covered with impenetrable rain forests, or are these lands filled with horrible tundras and wastelands? And are these snakes gigantic enough to swallow ponies whole, or are they just a simple nuisance, but due to Luna's imagination exaggerated to horrible measures?
Yeah, you can see that I'm reader/writer who loves details in the stories that I read and write. I can fully understand that you didn't had inspiration, but please, try to incorporate a little more details in the story. It's meant to be imaginative, but if you write such short chapters, it's not going anywhere. Just a few tips from another writer, that's all. Keep up the good work.
5766025 Thanks for the review!
5769750 You're welcome, my friend.