They say that whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger. If you found a way to actually kill a gun, would you shoot bullets out of your hands? Cause that would be awesome.
An alternate universe story to "The Secret Life of Rarity", where she didn't feel the need to kill again.
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Ever since that fateful day, Rarity has kept it secret. No one knows, not her parents, her sister Sweetie Belle, or any of her friends.
Well, that last one is about to change, if only she could get the blasted words out of her mouth.
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My, oh my~
9363562
Lol you hate it don't you? :p
9363611
Pffft... You wish.
It's actually really neat. I love the original story, and I got a real sense of nervousness while reading.
Upvote earned.
9363934
Aww, thanks :3
Why no Annie mur--Oh.
Well, the plot thickens. Like the ceiling stain.
Keep it up, pal.
Well alight, then. I guess she's not a serial killer in this timeline, unless you have a scene planned where she says "and there's another thing. I have this basement..."
One thing I will say is that dialogue is supposed to be followed by a comma, not a period. So instead of something like
"I killed my classmates." Said Rarity
It should be
"I killed my classmates," Rarity said.
Other than that, interesting so far.
Ooh damn the cat is out of the bag now, how will the others react, or even the CMC?
9384776
Thank you! :3
You got my interest. Hoping you would continue this.
Nice callback to the original story at the beginning with the repeat of "Today was the day."
You are Alive!!!!
Sweetie Belle: "Rarity, can I kill Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, please?"
Will this be updated? I’d love to see more!