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GWFan


An old Brony who sometimes writes fanfiction though I have slowed down a bit in recent months. I mostly do Let's Plays on YouTube now.

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After winning a bet, Photo Finish arrogantly accepts a challenge to participate in the next Celebrity Deathmatch Tournament. Unfortunately she can’t fight alone and turns to the only pony she knows who can help her… Fluttershy? But can timid Fluttershy really help her win Celebrity Deathmatch or will it end badly for both of them… in death? Maybe Fluttershy's friends can help her along the way.

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Comments ( 21 )

And with the start of this new fic, I ask you, the readers, to please give me some criticism in regards to how the fight scene is handled. Does it work or do any of you think it’s kind of confusing to have the commentators take over the role of describing the action? Should I separate their dialogue by using italics whenever they speak or some other method perhaps? Does that part need to be rewritten outright? By the way, I am intentionally leaving the gory stuff at least a little vague (sort of) because I think it works better that way since the readers can imagine for themselves how much blood is flying.
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FIRST, now to read, but before that all I can say is that IT WAS JUST A MATTER OF TIME:pinkiecrazy:

20% cooler than Dashie? Not possible.

This looks like it could be interesting. If Finish survives, I fully expect the other 5 to brutally murder her for manipulating Fluttershy.

Ok, I've read it and I can say that this have potential, Only Fluttershy can beat the shit out of a bear and call it a massage, but in a way Fluttershy didn't need to be a model to enter into the death match, because her and all the Elements bearers are alreadyrecognized national heroes and the defeat of Discord cemented that, and if that wasn't enought to built up reputation and fame then the Changeling Invasion aka: The Heroical Deffense of Canterlot Castle will cement and reinforce that, even if they didn't defeat Queen Crysalis directly (because Shining Armor and Candance did that) they participated in the uncover of the conspiracy, the Rescue of Candance, and single-hoofly defeat an entire warm of thousands of Changelings all across the city towards the Canterlot Castle Gardens, that Is even enought to ger actually national fame, at this point I would be actually expecting and not be surprised that Celestia did actually grant them nobility titles and high ranking military Ranks (even suprasing Shining Armor's definetly exopected rank promotion after the Changeling invasion)

I love it and can't wait to read more.
I thought the fight scene was good. It wasn't confusing or anything.
All the interactions between Photo Finish, Sapphire Shores and Hoity Toity were great. I love those three together, even when they want to kill each other.
Also, Fluttershy in such a tournament ? That can't end well ! --> "Give them a new kitty!?”...Yep, won't end well :ajbemused:
I love that Photo Finish can resist the Stare. That's just so her.

Favorited :coolphoto:

Those glasses must be Masterwork +50 to negate the effects of the stare :derpyderp2:

:pinkiegasp:

Seriously, was I the only one who hoped that Fluttershy would just kill with Diabetes or something... :pinkiesick:

That is what's known as "strategy."

Fluttershy knew she was out-matched strength-wise so she used the environment to her advantage.

Truly, she has succumb to her inner blood-lust.:flutterrage:

I was wrong. Thought Angel would escape and become a weapon to cries of Millhouse's "I'll allow it!".

This is awesome and hope there's more matches before the end. :raritydespair: *blaaarg*

This fic is so underrated. Sick charachterization, funny references, great dialogue and amazing grammar. 5 stars bro :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

"That’s it! You’re gonna die, clown!”

I loved that, it remined me of Happy Gilmore

“Ah! Fine… If you must know, I had to… baby-sit…”

Pinkie can really realte to that!

Heheheh. This is the third story that's had a Blueblood-butchering/bashing/posessing update in as many days. Couldn't think of another work beginning with B unfortunately.

However, it's good to know you're continuing with this. Was beginning to think it died:rainbowderp:.

Fluttershy could've totally taken Fancy Pants.

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Yeah, not sure quite what happened there. I lost touch with the fic for a while and just suddenly found some motivation again. Probably won't see the next chapter until sometme in September though. National Pony Writing Month calls!:eeyup:

I know writer fiat falls squarely into place here, but biting? That's been seen in CDM before, and kinda breaks the "No other rules" part.

Edit: Watched some old CDM, that's where you got it from. Ruleset pre-Ozzy victory.

Oh well. *Waits for the inevitable Mareilyn Manson song*

I have to admit I had trouble visualizing Rarity spewing.

Well, it is Celebrity Deathmatch.

I'm actually glad Fancy Pants is still alive. He's probably better than most rich ponies in Canterlot.

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