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When Twilight hears of Celestia's hunger problems, she vows to do everything she can to satisfy the mare's barbaric hunger. Can the young princess feed her mentor's hunger in time before it's too late?

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5188964
I fixed it, but who's to say that there won't be a sequel?

5189054 Heh. Only you know that for sure. I wouldn't mind seeing one, though.

40 apple pies

Twinkleshine ate forty pies. She ate 40 pies. That's as many as four tens. And that's terrible.

This is seriously unfunny. Out of character, contrived, not descriptive and not even so over the top it's ludicrous. This is just...bad.

5192603
that's good. It's supposed to be those things. If you think I did bad, then you rewrite it the right way since fan productions have to follow a certain set of rules to be good. Sorry I failed you so hard. Looks like I need to step up my game if I want to actually be a well-known writer here. Apparently being random and spontaneous isn't accepted here, and as much as I like to love and tolerate and turn the other cheek, looks like that ain't helping me one bit. I only wanted to get this (the story I mean) off of my chest because it pestered me like a bug in the night of a summer moon. Don't like it? Beat it, tell me what I did wrong through a message, and please, be honest with yourself.
Is it fun following the rules?
I'm the Discord of Writing, and I plan on keeping it that way, so you can blast of your Elements of Harmony at me and it won't change a thing because I am doing nothing wrong.:scootangel:

wow, that got dark fast
it was a good story, but holy money it just jummped of the chrysler building!

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If you think I did bad, then you rewrite it the right way since fan productions have to follow a certain set of rules to be good.

He didn't say that, or imply it. He just said it was bad.

I'm the Discord of Writing, and I plan on keeping it that way, so you can blast of your Elements of Harmony at me and it won't change a thing because I am doing nothing wrong.

Discord would be a lot funnier. And I doubt he'd get so defensive over someone calling his story bad.

5200236 well, damn. I didn't know the ponies here got so technical and literal. I just wanna write stories, geez Louis.

You, uh, didn't answer my question. Is Playing God a self-insert story?

5202838 it depends... I did happen to name my profile after Effiela, but I kinda did not want it to mean i put myself in the story... however, I am open to act like Effiela when the time is right... but don't we all play God sometimes?

I refuse to give this story a dislike, as I know how it feels when negativity is presented in large quantities.

5396146 regardless it still gets views every day

Or has Canterlot been put on lockdown due to a terrorist who wants to become God?Hmm:trixieshiftright:...media.animevice.com/uploads/1/18871/353504-light_yagami_super.jpg

5428759 it was actually a reference to my Playing God fanfic

Shit got serious really quickly!
This story kinda reminds me of that one episode of The Simpsons when Homer eats the alien and goes on a hunger rampage.

So, the real question is, did Applejack get eaten?
And will the rest of Ponyville follow? :trollestia:

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