Waiting

Sweetie Belle waited for her sister with Spike.

And waited.

She will come soon.

She just knows it.

In pop box 10/18/2014

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Infinite Evil

Infinite Evil #1 · Oct 18th, 2014 · 6 · ·

I get what the angle you were going for in this fic, but the execution simply just wasn't right.

Flying Fantasy Horse

Flying Fantasy Horse #2 · Oct 18th, 2014 · · ·

5153747

I know. I wasn't taking this story really seriously. I was just using it to get my writing gears back up.

Obviously right now, it pretty much isn't really good.

funbrand

funbrand #3 · Oct 18th, 2014 · · ·

Dont know if I'd go bragging about this story, hut its not bad at all! Its good for something i just found randomly

Flying Fantasy Horse

Flying Fantasy Horse #4 · Oct 18th, 2014 · · 1 ·

5154044

You read too fast.

Midna_Star

Midna_Star #5 · Oct 18th, 2014 · · ·

Why...I feel so sorry for sweety bell. I have no idea how I would be able to tell someone that alove had died

Glowing Ember

Glowing Ember #6 · Oct 18th, 2014 · · 2 ·

OH CELESTIA THE FEELS!

Hillbe

Hillbe #7 · Oct 19th, 2014 · 2 · ·

"I just don't know what happened"
It was cheese
"ouch"
"She's dead Jim" STAR TREK

PhoenixFeather-101

PhoenixFeather-101 #8 · Oct 19th, 2014 · 4 · ·

This fic was far too short to be sad. The 'sadness' that there was was badly executed.

Kodeake

Kodeake #9 · Oct 19th, 2014 · 3 · ·

Nice idea, bad execution. Too short and the "sadness" at the end felt really forced.

Meekoli Sean

Meekoli Sean #10 · Oct 26th, 2014 · · ·

I shouldn't be laughing being my parents died but the sadness wasn't present for me (my laughs at the emotional pain usually means I feel bad) but it wasn't that sad. good story though

Grey Wolf

Grey Wolf #11 · Jun 5th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I know others said this before me but I'll say it : nice idea with bad execution. Still, you'll get a like but not a fav. I'm sorry. But hey, this story was good!

Flying Fantasy Horse