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Rumble


No matter your age, everyone has the potential to be a great writer. You aim high and reach higher. We can all be awesome as long as we never give up.

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Even Wonderbolts hold some secrets. Two high-ranking members have a romantic one to hide, but will it be a secret any longer?


Proof Read by Calm Wind

Amazing Art by braddo

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Comments ( 33 )

That was a fun read. I thought it was well-written and the Wonderbolts seem like a fun group, if a little crazy at times. Excellent job, so have an upvote and a favorite! :twilightsmile:

The Wonderbolts know how to have fun and make love. A fun read, thanks mate. :rainbowkiss:

Woo! We got this out finally! :scootangel:

Ending made me crack up. :rainbowlaugh:

5219215 I'm glad you liked it :twilightsmile:

5219225 No problamo my friend :scootangel:

5220585 I know right? :rainbowlaugh:

5223348 I'm glad it did, I found it rather funny too :raritywink:

5223415 Sorain- Don't mind me captain, I'm just going to Clop to you guys making sweet lesbion love. :rainbowkiss: Gets hit with lamp.

5223429 :rainbowlaugh:, well I will hand it too the poor guy he is drunk, but it's hilarious nonetheless :scootangel:

5223446 Does he still snore that loud when he is sober? :rainbowkiss: And def. funny. :rainbowlaugh:

5223450 dunno, knowing how goofy he is, probably a yes :twilightsmile:

5223452 And sexy too..... I said nothing. :twilightblush:

You seem to be getting a little more frisky as of late :rainbowlaugh:

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He's innocent, i'm the one who wrote the lesbian makeout scene :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: (IT'S TOO LATE FOR ME!)

5225456 Oh boy! Don't corrupt my boy, you hear! :derpytongue2:

5226988 I promise I wont do anything bad bro :raritywink:

5227020 Good, because if you become a lesbian, I'll become really sad :rainbowlaugh:

5227264 promise... even though it's not possible unless I... let's not go down that route :twilightblush:

So... Sequel? It is totally in the works right? I was kinda itching to see how everyone would react

5234132 Well.... maybe :trollestia:

YYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY
fan art will start tomorrow

5268379 oh! I've seen your work! You're an awesome artist, can't wait to see what it's like. I'll do what Calm Wind does for art and get blogging :raritywink:

Is that kinda inappropriate about mlp
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Ee_uujKuJMI

Yes! I completely agree that three is not nearly enough fics for this pairing! Thank you for not only writing one, but a really good one at that! O enjoyed it a lot, and if you decide to write a sequel, I'll be there to read it! :raritywink:

5595896 Glad you love it. I quite like the shipping, it does need to get off the ground. I have actually written a fiction with this ship, but it's kind of a multiship between them and Lightning and Dash :pinkiecrazy: writers minds...

“I regret NOTHING!” Fleetfoot proudly patted a hoof against her chest.

Says the authors of every fic ever on this site. :rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by A E S T E T H I C_Fire deleted Jan 10th, 2018

I'm reading this over and over again. Great story,one of my favourites, actually : x

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I’m glad you enjoyed the story! :twilightsmile:

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