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Part of the Atramentverse


Fade returns from a harrowing trial, ready to become a full-fledged knight. She holds a secret, though: a friendship sparked between knight and monster.

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Memory Fade's

Memory Fade's what?

6782525 Ah, sometimes my wordplay ends up being kinda opaque, I think. It's a deliberately backward construction, "Memory [of] Fade's", or rewritten normally, "Fade's Memory". Kind of like "Enemy Mine", or something to that effect. The construction makes it similar to "Memory Fades". Sometimes I think I might be over-engineering things, but that's just how I try to do titles I guess, trying to put double-meanings or such into them.

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Too opaque, I think; I'm not sure English actually supports that construction with proper names. (It doesn't help that I haven't read the story or the others in the series, and so assumed the "Fade" in the description was short for a character named "Memory Fade".)

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