I'm a brony from Mexico. Sorry for any grammar mistake you most likely will find.
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Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash decided to go on a trip to Mexicolt to visit the location of one of Daring Doo's books. But they didn't know they arrived in the eve of the Day of the Dead.
What kind of things will they see?
(This story features words, phrases, and references to Mexican culture. The notes to their meaning can be found at the bottom of each chapter.)
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Primero que nada: un muy buen inicio, eh de aceptar que es una interesante representación de nuestra colorida cultura en el universo de MLP.
Espero poder leer mas de usted.
And for those whose didn't understand, I have a simple message: learn new idioms!
5150018 Muchas gracias
He notado que algo como el día de los muertos abre las puertas para muchas historias y que no ha sido utilizado a su maximo potencial.
Tambien tengo que agradecer a Rocinante, pues el realmente fue quien me dio la idea para esta historia
5150053
I am suddenly reminded of how many years it's been since Spanish class.
5150018
Errr... honestly, coming to an English-focused site to talk in another language and then demanding others to learn it is kinda super disrespectful. And this is coming from someone with Spanish as his native language.
Also.
This killed me. Instantly tracking. Oh my god.
EEEHHH. Ya era hora de que alguien hiciera un fic de Mexico. VIVA MEXICO.
5150132 Its a joke kid.
5150053 Pues en ese caso; gracias Rocinante!
Y es cierto, nuestra fiesta de para que hablar. Espero que trabajos como el tuyo hagan a otros darse cuenta de ello.
I always did that when I was little. ...and still do.
Also, I can say the most weirdest sentences in Spanish! *ahem* Mi pene es muy largo porque me encanta un té y yogur.
Good fic.
5150946 You remind me of this video.
5150892
Joke or not, you're purposely using a language the majority can't understand.
A story about Día de los Muertos? Oh, this is gonna be great.
5150124
You're not the only one, man. It's funny; I can remember understanding pretty much everything in those two comments. It might as well be Greek for all I know now...
5151545
The only things in that I can understand is library and small. xD
5150053
Creo que es la primera vez que veo a alguien hablando español en fimfic. Ahora no me siento tan solo...
Dejando eso de lado, creo que es la primera vez que veo una fic en que van a algun pais latinoamericano. es algo nuevo e interesante y espero ver mas...
Me encanto lo de Crepusculo Chispa.
Fijate donde pusistes sleep, "siesta" en ingles es "nap", "la siesta" seria "the nap".
5150132
I feel the same. I got that it was a joke but still...
There is a reason why they have as a rule to only post fics in english.
5152422 Un pequeño error, escribir en ingles y en español y pensar en como explicar las cosas pueden hacer estragos con mi cerebro
Me da gusto que te haya gustado
Just a small technical tip: you don't need to include both Twilight tags unless your story deals with both pre- and post-ascension Twilight.
If someone searches using alicorn Twilight's tag, they will already find all unicorn Twilight stories unless they explicitly anti-tag them. Unicorn Twilight tag searched will only find unicorn Twilight stories, because it's exists for those of questionable cognitive abilities who have emotional issues with her being an alicorn now.
Simply use alicorn Twilight.
5152604 Thanks
, I wasn't sure how the tag system worked with Twilight.
Bastante interesante, veamos que tal va.
Y es genial que haya un fanfic relacionado con México, creo que es el primero en este sitio.
This looks like fun.
Ah, the Sun Pyramid, that brings back memories... though I didn't wanted to climb it. Too afraid of heights for that. Or the Moon Pyramid for that matter. Or any other at all, most likely...
But man, that whole thing with the ghosts, specially RD's confessions.
Can't say I'd blame them, having only one day to interact with the living, might as well have fun with it. Although that aside, it would be nice to be able to be with your loved ones again, even if only for once a year.
If only it could be real...5179725 Rainbow Dash always dresses in style
The first idea is that the ponies in the graveyard were the ones who would come out, but that would've raised many questions about why and why it doesn't happen in Equestria. That's why i changed it to lingering spirits.
This was a fun chapter.
Me encanta. Siempre me da gusto que se escriban fics con esta temática. Me encantaron los chistes y como siempre, la cochina camisa no podía faltar XD Aun no me toca que me den una, pero, igual me encanta verla en cada lugar a donde me tocado ir.
Definitivamente seguiré esta historia. Besos!
Mi celebración favorita! justo como me la imagino, aunque sin espíritus errantes... aunque tampoco conocí mas que a 1 de mis familiares de ese lado...
5186025 Muchas gracias
La historia no será realmente larga, considerando que Día de los Muertos es solo un día. Pero esto me dio la idea de hacer otras celebraciones en futuros fics 
Note #7: I get that one!
Espero que también agregues el dia de los muertitos.
Este capítulo estuvo muy bueno.
Loved the ghosts, and that entire ending sequence was just great. Same for the pyramid visit.
Haha I love this. xD This is actually helping my Spanish language knowledge. #smrt
Mmm....the feels are strong in this one...
5258508 Didn't see that one coming, huh?
Great story, sadly too short, but very enjoyable.
5258515 I saw it like a blacked out train in a dark tunnel....
That was really quite enjoyable. Good job trying it all together with Dash visiting her mom at the end.
Wait is it finished?
5264767 Sadly yes, I could make the story last a bit longer with other side stories and all, but to be honest I feel that I fulfilled it's porpuse well here.
5267040
Make a spinoff where Twi tells everypony that stuff Dash said.
*Dies from overwhelming feels*
Oh, si. Esto estuvo genial, realmente lo disfrute mucho. (:
Mira nomas que cosas, un compatriota, que buena historia, me encanto la forma en que mostraste una celebracion tan representativa de nuestro pais, ojala hubiera mas historias como estas o basadas un poco en la fabulosa y extensa mitologia de Mexico.
Gran trabajo y sigue asi.
not a pyramid
a pyramidal structure
not a pyramid