Warning
This chapter will depict scenes of sadism and torture. Please keep this in mind.
Chapter 16
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Water splashes onto my face and I cough, blinking my eyes to try and see where I am.
“She’s awake, your highness,” the female voice I heard before blacking out says and I just catch sight of the unicorn mare from before passing by me. The room I'm in is dark and I can't really see much, but ponies had such bright colours, they were easy to spot, even in darkness, depending on the level of darkness, that is.
As she moves away another unicorn walks past her and stops in front of me. He has a white coat, blonde mane and is wearing things that look like those pins only royalty wear.
I realize who he is almost at once. Luna and Twilight had told me about him. Prince Blueblood. He is one of the least liked of the Royal Family, Rarity telling me he had the manners of a mule, yet even they would have more courtesy than he did.
I also become all too aware of the straps holding me down and the metal collar around my neck.
“Wh-what are you doing?” I ask, both angry and scared. I’d just learned I’ll never see my family again several days ago. Couldn’t whatever this bully of a prince want wait until I’d at least had a good cry? "Where're Fancy Pants and Fleur?"
The last thing I remember is Fleur and myself sitting by the fire in Fancy Pants' living room, before the crashing of glass and Fancy's caused caused us to go and check what was happening. I'd heard a voice say, "Got her", then everything went black.
He smirks and I feel a chill go down my spine. “Those two upstanding, yet misguided ponies you were no doubt planning on causing harm to are safe and sound back at their estate. And, as for what i'm doing, I’m going to give you the punishment that my aunties are too kind-hearted and foolish to give you. The punishment you deserve.”
I suddenly realize that I can’t feel my mane or tail billowing. I try to glance back, but my head is being held in place by straps. I'm lying on my stomach on some kind of large metal table.
“Wondering where your mane and tail are?” Blueblood asks, sneering. “Your mane and tail are manifestations of the infinite well of magic within you. The well you copied from my aunt when you took her away. So, with that anti-magic collar blocking all you magic, you've become a bald filly.” He chuckles. “Makes you look even more pathetic than you already are.”
I struggle, trying to free myself, use my magic, anything, but it's like something is blocking my connection. I feel helpless and sacred. I can’t use my magic, I can’t get out of the straps.
I stare at Prince Blueblood as he draws nearer, the grin on his face scaring me beyond anything I’ve ever felt.
“P-p-please,” I begg, my voice squeaking. “L-let me go. I-I haven’t done anything wrong.”
His sneer turns into a snarl. “Nothing wrong? Nothing wrong? You corrupted my aunt and tore her from her sister for a thousand years and you have the gall to say you did nothing wrong!?”
I would have winced when he started shouting, but the straps stop me from moving at all.
“Prince Blueblood,” the mare’s voice says sternly from somewhere I can’t see.
Blueblood calms down, his sneer returning. “You will pay for what you’ve done, monster. And we will start with your magic.”
My eyes bulge. “Wh-wh-what are you gonna do?”
His eyes flashed with something dark and his sneer becomes even crueler. “Bring the guillotine.”
My heart stops. A guillotine?! He's going to chop off my head?!
My fear turns into confusion when the mare from before comes into my eyesight, a really small version of a guillotine floating in her magic, which is brown, like her eyes.
I cock an eyebrow at the tiny thing. I’ve seen stuff like it before. A friend of my family had one he used to chop his fruits. What were they planning on doing with it? There's no way my head would fit through the hole.
I get my answer seconds later and my stomach drops again. Blueblood moves something like a small table in front of me, then places the tiny guillotine on it and starts pushing it towards me with his magic.
It takes a second for me to see where it's headed. I try everything I cab to move, to do something, but I'm powerless as he moves the hole of the guillotine over my horn and locks it into place.
I stare at him, my eyes wide and brimming with tears, knowing full-well just what he has in mind.
“Please,” I whimper, tears sliding down my face. “Please, don’t.”
He just chuckles, and pulls a string on the guillotine, releasing the tiny blade.
It's over in a second.
My eyes widen further in horror as my horn seemes to fall down passed my eyesight in slow motion, before it hits the table, making a dull thumping sound as it hits the metal, then bounces off and out of my sight.
I hadn’t even felt it. The blade had just cut through my horn like a knife through butter.
My breathing becomes faster and heavier.
He cut off my horn. He cut off my horn. HE CUT OFF MY HORN!!
Through my tears I see Blueblood lean down and pick my horn up with his hoof.
He grins, tossing it to the mare, who grabs it with her magic, a sinister smile on her face as she movedsout of sight again, then Blueblood turns his attention back to me. “Now that your magic’s gone, let’s deal with your flight.”
My blood goes cold, and it had already gone cold ages ago. My wings?! He's going to take away my wings, too?!
The sound of hooves came from somewhere behind me and Blueblood grinned. “I told you all,” he said, sounding pleased. “Celestia and Luna would never had punished her properly. But now we, the only ponies with sense, will deal her what she deserves.”
“It’s a good thing I talked with that young Rich mare filly while I was staying in Ponyville,” a stallion’s voice said. “She told me angrily that it wasn’t fair that this monster got to spend Hearth’s Warming with the princesses whilst her own family are shunned.” He chuckles. “Bet she’ll be pleased to learn when she’s been dealt with.”
My stomach twists. Rich mare? Like, Filthy Rich Rich. But, but that means Diamond Tiara. She told these crazy ponies where to find me? She sent them to do this to me?
No. No, she wouldn’t. Tiara is mean and a bully, but she wouldn’t go that far... would she?
“So,” Blueblood calls out, pulling me from my thought, “who’s ready to free the skies of this beast?”
There're cheers and I would have trembled if the straps weren’t holding me in place.
I feel magical auras grip my wings and pull them out, stretching them until they were wide.
“First,” Blueblood sneers, “remove the feathers. We want to make her suffer for what she’s done to my aunts.”
Without warning I feel a sharp tug as one of my primary feathers is torn out by somepony’s magic.
I winced as best I can in the straps, whimpering. It hurts. It hurts so much.
Again and again and again they pull out my feathers. Each time they do, I cry out in pain. Twilight, Rainbow and Fluttershy had taught me how to preen my feathers without hurting myself, but the way these ponies are yanking out my feathers is ten times worse than any of the times I’d messed up while learning to preen and yanked one out myself.
When all my feathers are gone I'm sobbing, my now bear wings aching from the pain and the feeling of having no feathers on them.
“Now for the really fun part,” Blueblood grins.
I feel the magical grip on my wings drop, causing them to brush against the table and my sides. I wince at how tender they feel and try to keep them outstretched, if only so they weren’t brushing against anything.
“What are you talking about, Blueblood?” one mare’s voice asks, sounding confused. “We’ve taken her horn and her ability to fly. Removing all the feathers means it will take months for them all to grow back, during which time she will be in immense pain whilst her wings are bear. Isn’t that enough?”
Blueblood’s sneer turned into a cold look. “What are you implying?”
“Well,” the stallion from before says, though I still can’t see him, "we all came to you because you told us if we helped you we could properly punish Nightmare Moon.”
“And we’ve done that,” another mare’s voice says, sounding unsure. “What more could we do?”
The cold look turns into a dark sneer. “First her horn, then her feathers. Now, we remove her wings.”
A chilling silence goes through the dark room. Nopony says anything for several moments.
Then, one mare speaks up. “Are you mad?!” At once I feel magic tugging the straps holding my hind legs. “We’re not removing her wings—”
There is the sound of a magical aura and a scream, followed by the magic tugging at my straps stopping and the sound of something thudding against a wall.
“What’s in Tartarus is wrong with you?” an angry stallion’s voice shouts, followed by running hooves and his voice asking, “How badly are you hurt?”
“You fools! Don’t you see! If we don’t remove her wings she will only rise up again!” Blueblood looks at each of them, his eyes holding something I can only call insanity.
“She’s just a filly, Blueblood!” one mare’s voice says and I feel several different magical grips taking hold of the straps. "We all agree that she needs to pay for what she did, but even so, she's still just a filly!"
“NO!” There is a flash and the sound of dozens of bodies hitting the wall followed.
Blueblood glares beyond me and then walks out of my line of sight. I hear him use his magic again, before the room goes quiet.
“I’ll just tell auntie they were crazed ponies, willing to discredit me,” I hear him mutter as he comes back and stands in front of me again, his sneer returning. “After all, I'm above suspicion, since I've let her use my own personal guards in her pointless search. Oh, well. If nopony’s going to help me, I’ll just enjoy this all by myself.”
I whimper as he moves away, his magical grip taking hold of my left wing.
“I promise, this is going to hurt, a lot.”
I scream as his magic suddenly yanksmy wing and I feel it dislocate.
“Shut up!” he shouts, slamming a hoof into my head before he pulls again, even harder.
I would have screamed louder, but the world is going black and I feel something taking over me, but it in’t sleep.
Mama! I thought, not caring who my thoughts went out to. Please, save me! Save me from the monster!
You seem to forget that she was staying with Cheerilee and Scootaloo in this version, nor Dinky and Tiara, and was with Scootaloo when she was foalnapped.
Also there is a whole paragraph copied from pervious chapter.
In addition to what Samellan said, I could be getting my color scheme wrong... but was she just kidnapped by Immatoonlink?
Step four: Acceptance.
Um... is what Princess Luna said about hew being your mother true?
(¿;) Nosy nitpick
Incorrect. She's with Scootaloo.
I honestly think you should have just left well enough alone, also, what about the school fire when Stellar saves Diamond? That was a fantastic moment of character building from both parties, even from the would be kidnappers.
I liked the original version of this story better. Now it's just littered with continuity errors.
6751522 thank you for pointing that out. Also
Um... i don't remember such a scene in any of the versions of this story. If you download that from before, you'll have to PM it to me, because, when i read that, my mind went
S catch what I siad in the last chapter
The darker part is here
Stellar is still asking where "Diamond and Dinky" are after she wakes up instead of Scootaloo... Might want to fix that.
You should have left the orginal. I like how you tried to improve your story, I really do but you need to rewrite everything if you change something. I don't mean to be rude but yeah this should have been made a seperate story.
It is at this point that all of these conspirators must be executed, no exceptions.
Anyone willing to torment and torture a child is far too dangerous to be allowed to live. Even their disagreeing with Blueblood about the wings does not afford them any mercy.
Let them all be cut down like chaff, and may their souls burn in Tartarus forever more.
Chapters like this and villains like Fake Blue Blood really make me wish I could introduce them to a spell called Vengeance. I doubt it could be considered an original spell idea. Just the usual "make the bad guy fell all the pain they caused their victims, the victim's friends and the victims family. The more original part is the accessories. Healing and sustaining aura so the "bad guy" can't die go, insane, or lose consciousness. Pain limiter removal. Cures all types of insanity like: Thinking you are always right, not being able to tell right from wrong, enjoying pain, stupidity(such as in thinking some one is evil becauseof how or who THEY LOOK LIKE!!), etc. With the new sword shape feature. Want to draw the "Bad Guy's" punishment out? Just insert the blade shallowly to prolong their suffering even if they learn their lesson. Don't feel like taking your time? Want them to fell all the pain at once? Just thrust the blade in all the way up to the hilt. The "Bad guy" will only have 5 hours to learn their lesson before the life sparing and sanity preserving feature shut off. After that their body and mind will tear itself apart from the stress. You may be wondering what " learns their lesson" means. It means the "bad guy" realizes their mistakes and truly regrets their actions. Minimum of suffering all their victims pain at least once required. You too can own this amazing spell with one low payment of 99 Bits. But if you act within the next 15 minutes we will slash the price by 90% and practically give you the Vengeance spell for the unbeatable price of 9 Bits. Order NOW!!
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7136294 To make it an fairytail move, call it " Karma counter."
kill the bastard
I definitely need an interdimensional ship. to kick Blueblood ass
Burn the mane, the coat and the tail.
Cut that useless horn!
Tonight Tartarus will dine on some BlueBlood!!!!!!
Nightmare Moon: Ughh... I cant believe i wanted popcorn on this...
*Background shouting*
Nightmare Moon: SHUT UP!
I AM GOING TO KILL HIM!
My god this is by far the most insane Blueblood I've ever seen!
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Get the fuck in line.
At times like this, I think that everyone has a reason for what they're doing. I think that although people do wrong stuff, we need to deal with it rationally... Ohohoho man. I think that, but right now I'd love to jump in the story and- wow I'm getting mad over a story jesus I should go to sleep right now. Just wow, I'm sure many of you had similar thoughts but just wow I'm thinking some dark stuff.
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Oh trust me my friend. Your thoughts aren't as dark as mine.
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Oh fuck that gave me chills when I read that
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You get in the story as your profile pic. What will you do?
burn burn burn burn in burden Satanist fire
Yikes forever.
Well now Blueblood really needs to be made an alicorn...so he can suffer the same punishment/torture he just inflicted on Michael and then some.
Holy fucking shit, I feel like murdering someone now.
Wait. does Stellar get tortured or does the foalnappers? I know what I hope, and I know what I expect. And what I hope and what I expect do not match up. And let's just say that I hope I'm wrong about what I expect.
Then again, the worse Stellar gets it, the worse the foalnappers get it
I was afraid I was right. Fuck you, Blueblood! And fuck you too, Diamond Tiara! Anypony else I need to say "fuck you" to?!
Luna said how she and Celestia had to regrow entire limbs before. Wings are technically limbs. But can alicorns regrow or repair their horns? I'm just thankful that she didn't feel her horn.
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For the conspirators, immediate execution.
For Blueblood, death is too easy. I would bestow on him immortality. Then I would have him in chains at the bottom of a vat of boiling acid. He'd be in a constant state of having his flesh eaten away by the acid. Being submerged would mean he's constantly in a state of drowning. The acid filling his lungs will eat him away from the inside out. And not being allowed to die until there is nothing left of him that can feel! And give him a brain tumor. That would be sweet irony.
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Get in line, buddy.
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I think that Blueblood already took care of the execution...
KILL HIM AND KILL HIM NOW!
Ok I haven't even started reading this chapter yet. But hopefully that warning refers to what Luna does to the foalnappers and not what they do to Stellar. Though I'm probably going to be wrong
Edit after finishing the chapter: Called it
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Got me in the first half not gonna lie
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I would take your offer but I got karmic retribution so yeah
Not going to read the chapter.
The comments are enough.
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If you think the comments are enough, then you have not read the chapter.