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Coruscating Cloak


Esoteric, Punny and sometimes down right crazy, but hey at least I am not completely dull.

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Michael "Mac" Tempyst while perusing the internet after work stumbles on the Vogon Biotech Advertisment. Curiosity gets the better of him so he checks it out. Sometimes you get so much more then you bargain for, even when you are told exactly what you are getting. Especially when what you get are the Princess of love and her husband. really what could possibly go wrong?

note: This story will likely at some point have sex implied, at that time I will adjust the tags accordingly. cover image pending.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 19 )

I liked this one. Good job. Though, the gore tag kind scares me...

I don't like the gore tag either. Why is Chrysalis tagged though?

I added the gore tag because I have a tendency to get very detailed. Since the story takes place near the stacks and a lot of later chapters have major scenes in them it seemed appropriate. As for the other tag you will see. Hopefully I will get chapter two back and up by Sunday and it will start to get clearer.

Sorry the update is taking so long. My pre-reader/editor got sick.

Should a waited mate. Or ask someone to edit. Trust me. But keep this going chap.

Okay, I'm wanting to read more of this. I like the direction it's going, and I like the characters so far. I do hope that you choose to continue it.

RJP

5553326 I will be, some changes in my life has made the writing more difficult and I am struggling with the next chapter but it is in the works.

Good chapter, and you captured life in the Stacks very well with those few paragraphs. Let me know if there's anything you'd like to know about the verse, as it sits.

- RJP

Stacks? Like the {very} bad neighborhood? {hehe get it? NEIGHborhood? Nevermind.}:trollestia:

Dun, Dun DUUUUUUNNNNN!!!!! Keep going! you're doing great! {Also FIRST(plzDontHate) and MOOOOAAAARRRR!!!:trollestia:}

Comment posted by Healthy Clop deleted May 21st, 2016

That was hard on the feels. Please write more thank you.

I LIKE THIS STORY VERY MUCH!:trollestia:

I have been waiting patiently for this story to continue. So far, I am sad.

Comment posted by Fracturedheart deleted Nov 23rd, 2018

It is with deep condolences that I report on the 24th of December of the year 2022, this story as well as the known vogonverse, is deceased. To all new readers I urge you to enjoy what you can of this glorious tag but do not be surprised by the incomplete tags. The chances are to slim by this point. So farewell on your ways travelers and luck to ye.

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